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Burners & Amazing Pieces

Discussion in 'Picture gallery' started by Kayone707, Sep 11, 2008.

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    Hey guys, did my attempted my first piece today. Can you give me some feedback? Be as brutally honest as possible, for me that is the best way to get better

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    HEY MAN! THATS A PRETTY DECENT FIRST ATTEMPT!

    I saw a few things that i personally think need attention...

    try to space your letters out some more, they're too close. experiment with different caps too! try to work in some cutbacks to reduce the lines. I like your color choices! just try to maximize your space.
     
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    I would recommend a proper background if you have the possibility to do so.
     
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