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Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. TalibKweli

    TalibKweli Elite Member

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    i passed by that ditch, all i saw was swich
    naked and crying like a schoolgirl bitch
    why you angry kid? cause i stoled your clips?
    raped your sister and stoled your grits
    simmered that shit up and spread it on ritz
    i ll beat you down and make your dad feel the hits
    talkin bout homicide and dead bodies
    i thought snitchin on real heads was your main hobby
    wouldnt know what to do with a 9 if ya had one
    talkin bout blastin cats and blood shed, who you foolin son?
    you're the last in the food chain, cause i am number one
    i eat off silver plates imported from china
    while you eat dinner crumbs off your moms vagina
    and dont you ever talk bout sportin a trenchcoat
    cause i ll rip out your adams apple and watch you choke
    turn blue like the color of the sky
    while swich tried to yell, IM ONLY 15 I DONT WANNA DIE
    fuck with a saint and that's what you get
    so quit the tough talk ya faggot and show some respect
    your played out lyrics dont proove skills
    useless like the skin round my dick and my anti depressant pills
    swallow you whole and spit you out
    dress you up like carlton banks and show you the college route
    analyzing your rhymes was a waste of time
    shit i dont even try when i wanna rhyme
    if i put half my brain in it
    your sorry ass wouldnt last half a minute
     
  2. DaseONE

    DaseONE Senior Member

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    k k yo yo, Gee wigga' what gangster gee? cant you see i bust a rap with glee im old gee i can make words rhyme more then a dime yes thats 10, 10 naked men raping the hen oh snap oh snap...Seriously this thread is retarded.
     
  3. swich

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    i passed by that ditch, all i saw was swich
    naked and crying like a schoolgirl bitch
    why you angry kid? cause i stoled your clips?
    raped your sister and stoled your grits
    simmered that shit up and spread it on ritz
    i ll beat you down and make your dad feel the hits
    talkin bout homicide and dead bodies
    i thought snitchin on real heads was your main hobby
    wouldnt know what to do with a 9 if ya had one
    talkin bout blastin cats and blood shed, who you foolin son?
    you're the last in the food chain, cause i am number one
    i eat off silver plates imported from china
    while you eat dinner crumbs off your moms vagina
    and dont you ever talk bout sportin a trenchcoat
    cause i ll rip out your adams apple and watch you choke
    turn blue like the color of the sky
    while swich tried to yell, IM ONLY 15 I DONT WANNA DIE
    fuck with a saint and that's what you get
    so quit the tough talk ya faggot and show some respect
    your played out lyrics dont proove skills
    useless like the skin round my dick and my anti depressant pills
    swallow you whole and spit you out
    dress you up like carlton banks and show you the college route
    analyzing your rhymes was a waste of time
    shit i dont even try when i wanna rhyme
    if i put half my brain in it
    your sorry ass wouldnt last half a minute [/b][/quote]
    these wak bithes keep steppin up to the best/
    i put a bullet through ya chest and i must confess/
    i made ya mom undress as i caressed her brests...she said i do it the best/
    ill barrel you with a gun so big it broke my gunrack/
    comeback with so much ammo i dont know where my guns at!/
    the metals sideways on ya chicks head as she licks my nut sack/
    as you watchin with a bat but too pussy to attack/
    now she on my lap and im hearin shit clap/
    and after that it still not stoppin/
    ill shove the barrel up her ass and give a new meaning to pussy poppin/
    punk ass bitch...!
     
  4. TalibKweli

    TalibKweli Elite Member

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    how could a pussy pop with a barrel in her anus
    wack lines like that wont get you props or famous
    step to you, fuckin right i did it
    cause i just toasted your sorry ass but you'd never admit it
    your head is jammed in your ass better call a doctor
    wear tight ass shirts so you cant pop your collar
    your rhymes aint worth half a dollar
    your a pre-school emcee fuckin with a top scholar
    you probably wear scarface t shirts to act like a baller
    get realistic kid, you aint gifted
    i push you out my way cause you just got shifted
    dead weight lifted, off my chest, stop while i am ahead kid you cant impress
    even your mom says your a joke
    i agreed with her then she proceeded to give me deepthroat
    while she was suckin and slurpin
    you were in the corner of the room jerkin
    then your dad walked in like
    wait its not what you think
    then he grabbed you and started fuckin you over the kitchen sink
    all of this just to get to the point, you aint talented son, you aint worth a dime
    the more i think about
    you should start suckin dick for studio time
     
  5. swich

    swich Elite Member

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    how could a pussy pop with a barrel in her anus
    wack lines like that wont get you props or famous
    step to you, fuckin right i did it
    cause i just toasted your sorry ass but you'd never admit it
    your head is jammed in your ass better call a doctor
    wear tight ass shirts so you cant pop your collar
    your rhymes aint worth half a dollar
    your a pre-school emcee fuckin with a top scholar
    you probably wear scarface t shirts to act like a baller
    get realistic kid, you aint gifted
    i push you out my way cause you just got shifted
    dead weight lifted, off my chest, stop while i am ahead kid you cant impress
    even your mom says your a joke
    i agreed with her then she proceeded to give me deepthroat
    while she was suckin and slurpin
    you were in the corner of the room jerkin
    then your dad walked in like
    wait its not what you think
    then he grabbed you and started fuckin you over the kitchen sink
    all of this just to get to the point, you aint talented son, you aint worth a dime
    the more i think about
    you should start suckin dick for studio time [/b][/quote]
    the bullet goes in the ass and out the clit/
    thats how the pussy'll pop u stupid bitch/
    ill flip ya pre-teen ass with a flik of my wrist/
    and fill ya moms cunt with just the tip of my dick/
    they say im insane cuz i talk to my bullets and clips/
    come too close and ill pop a hole in ya hips/
    drop to the floor and swallow the blood on ya lips/
    anytime i can man i droppin a hit/
    whether it be 4 ya ears or one for ya lip/
    fuck all ya shit talkin and get to walkin/
    the voices in my head make me get to stalkin/
    b4 they were sleepin and silent/
    but ya fucked with me and now theyre making me violent!
     
  6. ASEN

    ASEN Banned

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    fucking nice whoa, you in top shape man

    swich, im sorry dude, ill hit back when im good and blazed
     
  7. TalibKweli

    TalibKweli Elite Member

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    if that's being violent then i must admit
    your attitude is weaker then the shit you spit
    my girls clit got chipped a little bit
    but your still dropping sperm cells when you take a shit
    why do you resort to guns whenever you drop a line?
    i mean i got nothing against your style, that shits fine
    the voices in my head are tellin me to continue
    blow your mind like snots stuck to a tissue
    your dad picked up the newspapers latest issue
    front page ''SWICH STILL MISSING'' but he doesnt miss you
    you recycle lines and just change metaphors
    that shits gettin old like prehistoric dinosaurs
    so call it what you wanna, take some time to think
    cause EVERYONE on this site knows you're already extinct
    a simple memoir of a child turned violent and angry
    cause he got served on the internet and rejected by his family
    13 bars you dropped....is that all you got?
    i got my sleepin bag and tent ready cause im gonna rock the spot
    drop whats hot, like it or not, im coming for you swich
    you remind me of car2nist, cause all you can do is bitch
    id like to stay a lil more swich but im really tired
    so wrap this up mr trump
    [Broken External Image]:http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6903/donaldtrump2vk8.jpg
    you're fired
     
  8. nerdx

    nerdx Elite Member

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    this thread is awesome.
     
  9. swich

    swich Elite Member

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    if that's being violent then i must admit
    your attitude is weaker then the shit you spit
    my girls clit got chipped a little bit
    but your still dropping sperm cells when you take a shit
    why do you resort to guns whenever you drop a line?
    i mean i got nothing against your style, that shits fine
    the voices in my head are tellin me to continue
    blow your mind like snots stuck to a tissue
    your dad picked up the newspapers latest issue
    front page ''SWICH STILL MISSING'' but he doesnt miss you
    you recycle lines and just change metaphors
    that shits gettin old like prehistoric dinosaurs
    so call it what you wanna, take some time to think
    cause EVERYONE on this site knows you're already extinct
    a simple memoir of a child turned violent and angry
    cause he got served on the internet and rejected by his family
    13 bars you dropped....is that all you got?
    i got my sleepin bag and tent ready cause im gonna rock the spot
    drop whats hot, like it or not, im coming for you swich
    you remind me of car2nist, cause all you can do is bitch
    id like to stay a lil more swich but im really tired
    so wrap this up mr trump
    [Broken External Image]:http://img244.imageshack.us/img244/6903/donaldtrump2vk8.jpg
    you're fired [/b][/quote]
    13 aint all i got but its all i need/
    13 hits of weed and ill make u bleed/
    13 times i fucked your mom and she still love me/
    13 is my luckies number u fake ass G/
    my mind is equivelent to the dictionary/
    spit shit so sick some claim its scary/
    ya mom needs to clip her slit cuz that shits hairy/
    i bet now your feelin weary and a bit dazed/
    im smokin the competition so call me purple haze/
    the only days i get blazed is when i get paid/
    thats 7 days a week bitch, the same days i get laid/
    and u havent had pussy since the mutha fucker had u/
    13 bars again bitch. and i still managed to beat u...
     
  10. swich

    swich Elite Member

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    aight man.
     
  11. Lateness

    Lateness Senior Member

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    Ayo I spit more than a cobra with bleeding gums/
    Imma beat some nuns until jesus comes with freakin guns/
    I'm nice when I'm droppin a rhyme/
    You're not gonna shine like a diamond in a box in a mine/
    I'm talking my mind when I'm freeing right/
    Kidnapping Jordan and Jackson is the only time your keeping mics/
    So free tonight but I'm stopping on time/
    Cause I break up with my bitch at the drop of a dime/
    Then I get yours and make her thinks she's my main squeeze/
    I'm so cold when she swallows she gets the brain freeze/
    I hate thieves but I'm robbing you and grabbin cash/
    A cereal killa don't mean blastin caps at apple jacks/
    My battle raps grapple cats so best to train hard/
    So pass the macks I clack on tracks like a train yard/
    I embarrass you in public like Peewie Herman/
    Take what I say to the heart like Stevie Irwin/
    I'm the king in this city you're my luckiest jester/
    And you never could test me like a gutless professor/
     
  12. Blix

    Blix Senior Member

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    wait its not what you think
    then he grabbed you and started fuckin you over the kitchen sink


    a line very similiar to that was used earlier even if it was you its lame to repeat yourself


    edit here it is

    ''you get locked in the clink
    your cell mate have you bent over the top of the sink
    the guard walked passed he was so shocked he dropped his drink
    he tried to pull his pants up talkin about wait its not what you think''
     
  13. TalibKweli

    TalibKweli Elite Member

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    what's even lamer is when you browse the site to find a punch line and use it against me, get a life junior
     
  14. TalibKweli

    TalibKweli Elite Member

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    :lol: are you for real?

    you take two words and make them rhyme
    might aswell quit now cause your wasting my time
    13 hits of weed, nickel bag or a dime?
    not that it matters much, that aint a crime
    but when it comes to being a bitch your mine
    and when it comes to spiting true lyrics, im fine
    and when it comes to gats and clips your lyin'
    your fake ass chain is the only thing that makes ya shine
    this is the last time i respond, so take my raps and print it
    cause i just ruined your sorry ass in under a minute




    *come back at me when you have real shit and real verses, cause your shit aint even worth responding to,i f you wanna go anywhere well first off it isnt over the net, and second of all you should hang up your skills in a closet cause you dont wanna let that shit seep out*
    peace
    PS- keep my name out of your mouth
     
  15. Blix

    Blix Senior Member

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    I didnt really browse I just remembered the line
     
  16. Lateness

    Lateness Senior Member

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    This one goes out to Swich

    I'm a mistake in the matrix a brilliant glitch/
    When you switched from clits to dicks is when you really did swich/
    There's nothing else to say dawg you're really just gay/
    I'm not gonna call your mom a whore cause I didn't even pay/
    13 bar verse yo that doesn't compute/
    My kids are the realness so even my dick cums truth/
    you're done dude like baked surfers rave purgers/
    You never had beef like a vegan with fake burgers/
    Printing flyers on the back is what I use your verses for/
    You're not even worth ten line but to me that's a perfect score/

    Go suck your thumb and tell mommy how your rap career is over Swich
     
  17. TalibKweli

    TalibKweli Elite Member

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    Cage - Movies for the blind (Teenage Death)

    dont try to pull fast ones

    The Proof
     
  18. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    this is 4 all wack pussys(like myself)
    imma choke u,crush ur wind pipe and get a cramp on,
    put boot to face , and get ma stamp on,
    leave u bloodyed up , like a used tampon,
    muerder u like charlse manson,and ur girl mumma thinks im handsom,
    i aint got a chance son, of pulling this off,so imma stop,
     
  19. ASEN

    ASEN Banned

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    While the rest of the forum's trainin' vandals
    This cypher's bound to hurt cuz of shame n' scandal
    Bit from Cage? Lateness ground to dirt in stagnant shambles
    Stay down to earth like paintin' mantles in pagan sandals
    But you know i loved the way whoa was playin you tards
    I seen less pretentious antics from actors displayin' awards
    Sayin' you sorry won't change the fact that you playin' atari
    In mom's basement, face it, you even a failure to Maury
    Evident grabs from a man obsessed with diligent lectures
    Switch your intentions like a transient spit in your breakfast
    Swich, i don't hate, i even made your wife chuckle
    When i told her the way you lose grip with them white knuckles
    Your so full of shit, the fanbase supportin' your hype buckles
    I don't get the attitude, it's like you been with the mob
    But it's no sweat to my brow, cuz whoa's gonna finish the job
     
  20. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    omg i was soo stoned wen i wrote that i just red it back,''ur girl mamma'' lol. nice stuff asen