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Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. Small Time Crook

    Small Time Crook Senior Member

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    sittin in church, preacher preachin his lies
    little does he know that i got a suprise
    hidin under my coat, got a knife, gonna make him choke
    then ima go to the nuns, fuck them some
    then i pull out the gauge, show them my rage, im havin fun
    maybe i am, dont know about you
    maybe i shoulda just stayed in school
    coulda learned something but instead i took a mission
    P.S. fuck the gang life and everybody in it
    back on track, out of the holy house
    goin' up north to visit my homie now
    serve me up a G, i get it with glee
    but little does this ***** know he's about to D I E
    that's how it goes, happened so fast
    first a red flash then again with the shotgun blast
    sittin there like Urkel, did i do that
    sorry buddy didnt mean to make your brain go SPLAT
    but that's how it happens, fuck my life and yours gets it twice
    STC runnin around takin' lives
    not a serial killer in fact its all be premediated
    maybe not Small Time is gonna get appreciated
    after the lies, and after the torment
    i need to make me some more golden moments

    freestyle that ima work a little more on and make.. "full".
     
  2. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    Listen,i dont want to leave.
    you just need time to cool off.
    you head needs to be recieved from this mental war.
    to flush anger,I put holes my door.
    Please dont do this to me,you beggin for more.
    You didnt think id hear the message from behind the door?
    well i did,look at me now,askin what for?
    ive lost hope,ive reached the end of the rope.
    im fucked,in the hairs of your scope.
    I asked to stay,you reply with nope.
    might as well call this the end.
    ive lost my fam,friends and girlfriend.
    my thoughts on life completely transformed.
    you have my heart torn.
    hell i dont even have time to mourn.
    look in my eyes ragged and worn.
    the scores ten to o dad,you fuckin won.
    i cant believe you still call me your son.
    or do you?
    look at me now,my heads at the tip of the gun,you dont even care.
    im here all alone,you wont even answer the phone.
    when i call all i get is the calling tone.
    you hur my moms and you hurt me to dad.
    i dont even know what to say,im not even mad.
    in a mental state and you cant relate.
    all i have to say is thank you.
    i hope my mom finds someone to replace you.
    this is my last resort,so dont worry about child support.
    just ignore me like usual.
    dont you dare step foot in my funeral.
    this voice is unheard.
    past the point of no return.
    remember when we used to hunt,dad?
    remember all the fun we had?
    remember that 22 you bought me,dad?
    well i have something to tell you.
    where do i begin?
    first off its under my fucking chin!
    im fighting a battle in my mind.
    to just pull the trigger to end it that much quicker.
    i have no dad to help me through it.
    i just want you to know.
    i love you,nah scratch that.
    YOU FUCKIN BLEW IT.
    you had my life in your hands and you fuckin threw it.
    remember this isnt a fucking song.
    its a suicidal note.
    i hate you,your a fucking joke!
    i hope you read this and choke.
    fuckin croak!
    so look in my lifeless eyes.
    no more disguise.
    nothing to hide.
    just shit back.
    and enjoy the ride.

    ..
     
    Last edited: Feb 21, 2008
  3. bountyhunter113

    bountyhunter113 Elite Member

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    traffic, traffic, i'm drivin in traffic.........
     
  4. Passleoinj

    Passleoinj Banned

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    can't knock the hustle
     
  5. JEDI-MASTER

    JEDI-MASTER Elite Member

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    new verse wat i got so far homebois supposed to come up wit tha other half for da collab
    Lost in this hypnotic stage, I call a life
    Through ganja fumes and cold brews
    I recall da cold questioning stare, the fury in the eyes
    Burning to bright
    Leaveing me questioning
    Who was wrong?
    Who was right?
    Lost in translation
    Jus a thought
    Packing da bag,
    I tell em wassup
    Pass da blunt,
    ima cop hit on dat grass
    The rattling cans, da heavy pull
    Pulls da rocawears down my ass, I let em sag
    Rather than let em hang round my waist and b called an upbeat fag
    chorus
    Murder me, , save me ,thank me
    This life I call my own will break me
    Murder me,save me, thank me
    This life I call my own has changed me
    Murder me,save me,thank me
    This life I call my own will break me

    Departing, a dozen cans in tow,
    showtime ***** lets go
    Walkin wit da crew, every ***** steps in sync
    Looking for dat perfect color, jus the right hue
    Spraying away, lost in da haze of paint
    Sudden rush of noise,
    Lost in a daze,fuckin confused
    5-0 flash they lights, dats our que
    Rushin through crowded street, da pressures on, I feel da heat
    Feeling much like a blessed saint, dippin below a church
    I think homebois ready to give up the game, gettinn ready to faint
    Hands dripping wet, fuckin pigs didn’t leave enuff time for da paint to set

    chorus
    Murder me, , save me ,thank me
    This life I call my own will break me
    Murder me,save me, thank me
    This life I call my own has changed me
    Murder me,save me,thank me
    This life I call my own will break me

    Dodging patrols we make it back to the fort
    Luck was on our side,
    none of da homies will face a day in court
    happy for da moment, none of us *****s truly glad
    weeds our last resort
    roll it, spark it, pass da jawn
    lifes not easy running the streets
    knowing ur an expendable pawn
    to ease the mind we write
    why?
    artisitic expression
    yet we rolled over by politic oppression
     
  6. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    im feeling like a greedy genius,
    this girl got me guessin'
    i got a question,
    your uncertainty has my emotions mixed,
    lets blaze the weed until everythings fixed
    seperate the real from the counterfit because
    i hate being around around a fake bitch,
    my girl has to keep it legit, because
    every moment with you is like kodak
    picture perfect girl you better know that..

    ughh quick shit.. just got some shit on my mind :)
     
  7. Passleoinj

    Passleoinj Banned

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    since monor and me stopped e-beefing with yall thugs
    its so empty in here :(
    so im picking on KAZE

    bitch made ass fagget

    talking bout your girl on a track
    ruthless yet courageous , cant call you homo on that
    i get head by the chicks you get all emotional with
    sorry to hear that ,let the weed blaze until everythings fixed
    im making your life a myth
    just like big foot in them hills
    to be such a pussy , writing about a bitch you must be on them pillz
    picture the perfect moment , me fuckin your girl on the sofa
    no remorse or mercy , puttin that pussy in a coma
    passleoinj is back motherfucka»

    pass the blunt
     
  8. Passleoinj

    Passleoinj Banned

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    it aint over yet

    remember last year, it was your birthday
    you met your girlfriend at her place
    at first , she looked at you a strange way
    as you was walking in the hallway
    cause ,
    ifucked her up on the wall
    fucked her down on the floor«
    got that bitch screaming
    PASS I CANT TAKE IT ANYMORE
    she was telling me nasty shit
    like : she liked my big dick
    she told me she wouldnt be satisfied by you
    after i stretched that shit , so fuck you
    youre bithc is mine i got her on her knees
    i got her all crying saying she loves me
    im sick of kaze half ass mc
    your dick is too small , and you want to get married
    lemme tell you something
    once they go to Pass
    they never come back
    poor kaze your case is over
    i hope after this story , you gon cry me a river
    actin ass rapper

    you aint shit and you know it
     
    Last edited: Feb 25, 2008
  9. Epoc

    Epoc Senior Member

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    I prefer my spandex to be free, who gives a fuck about the fleas. Same goes for cheese, wats wrong with second hand eats, i consider them to be previously used treats. An extra hint of mold may speak of tales told and scientifically its a lil bit too old, but my naval is brazen and my stomach bold. I'll down that morsel as easily as touching my torso.
     
  10. Kaze

    Kaze Elite Member

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    pass i bet your wishing you never started picking on me
    because im about to make lyrical history like taki 183 did for graffiti
    i rip your heart out pick it up and watch it stop beatin
    push you to the ground and all i hear is squeakin
    your homegirl call for medical treatment but your layin there
    dead from my verbal beatin
    and i bet you use google i classify that as cheatin to top that
    every line that comes out of my mouth is like nose candy, pure crack..

    no beef im so blunted .. cant think straight
    but your rhymes are bunk :)
     
  11. Passleoinj

    Passleoinj Banned

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    sry if i hurt your feelings
    id like to really shoot you nice lines
    but this thread is called FREESTYLE rappin
    so i actually freestyle you know
    still , fuck you :)
     
  12. Passleoinj

    Passleoinj Banned

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    you always escape reality when you rhyme
    you can't find a crime mentality so you talk about mine
    youre a lying piece of shit , cause you dont even graff
    talking about how you historic ,man i just laugh
    you say my homegirl calling for medical treatment
    goddamn , i didnt know you was schizoprenic
    say something wrong to my face , and you'll leave in a paramedic
    you call your raps verbal beatin
    for real man , youre just beatin the verbal
    how can rapper go that low?
    you maybe smoked the herbal to forget you were a bitch
    whos dying for my money , to buy you new cosmetics

    now eat my shit
    this is on top of the dome
     
  13. h!de7

    h!de7 Senior Member

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    who am i wizzle fa shizzle
    flow sicker then third floors in hospitals
     
  14. HoodRichSucka

    HoodRichSucka Elite Member

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    everyday i go to school pissed at the world
    hate almost everybody, got this list of girls.
    most of them tricks i cant tolerate
    soon they're throwin' bricks, next they hollar "rape!"
    operate like this? youll have to wait,
    and dollar weight, i dont compensate.
    we walk in the library to read six hundred books
    i said "fuck you teacher", u misunderstood.
    i cracked open a book on rape and drugs.
    smack, coke, weed, shrooms, bapes and thugs
    and what hatred does. but too late to fuss
    class dismissed and fuck this school stuff
    passed the test but dropped out, thats cool stuff.

    yea i dunno
     
  15. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    spittin dope fly shit got bitches sayin oh my lanta.
    spreadin my name on these streets equivilent to propaganda.
    stealthy slick moves,puttin ladies in the mood,quick like a panther.
    let your mouth run,street cred by the that weapon your holstering.
    ill spit flames down your throat,leave intestines smoldering.
    burnt off your eyelashes and got you shittin ashes.
    got verbal confrontations for protection,i dont have time for questions
    but im here to teach you bitches a lesson.
     
  16. Fuckin' with ya boy's girl that's a no no
    Ya boy being with the chick ya liked is a low blow
    all this world is filled with is bitches, hoes, and tricks
    money materialistic shit from clothes, cribs, and whips
    doin' a buck twenty and change, drunk and deranged
    mad at the world will leave me nothin but pain
    everything is crashin down quickly up upon my life
    my whip's tank on E, no bitch, and i'm paranoid so i walk with a knife
    fuck the law always givin me a suspicious look
    they see a hooded kid with a hat and think crook
    but fuck that i can handle myself i ain't shook
     
  17. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    dude...where the fuck have you been?
     
  18. Me? Mad Busy and Got Burnt Out On Keystyles.
     
  19. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    ploting sick shit, like war time profesers,
    spiting ten megatons of pressure,
    to compress ur, chest or,
    put ur lungs under sever stress. more,
    than you can stand,
    force them to contract and expand,
     
  20. HoodRichSucka

    HoodRichSucka Elite Member

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    REDO ha
    i bust open a book on rape and drugs.
    smoke crack, smack, coke, weed, bapes and thugs.
    what hatred does, is wait for us.
    but too late to fuss my dollar weight is plus.
    ill drink a forty in a minute, like who cares.
    drive to a party in the hood ,make the blue stare.
    cut their heads off, then drink the blood down.
    like i said 'tough', with krink i flood the town.
    go crazy with pieces and throw's alike.
    kill baby's with pieces, ha, blow's from dikes.
    dont fuckin' care, ponder what you think.
    build a fuckin' lair, and conjure up some ink...