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Freestyle Rapping

Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. ODonthesetrees

    ODonthesetrees Elite Member

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    it is 830 on a friday night
    need some sensi so i can feel alright
    droppedd 5 pills with a bottle of jack
    damn i need me a cadillac
    to roll down the street kickin my beats
    pick me up a sack of sensi sweets
    pick me up some bitches to roll back home
    and smoke the ganja while they lick they bones

    ...that was hte first time i ever ripped one of these that sounded decent without needing to think half way through it...HELL YA
  2. ODonthesetrees

    ODonthesetrees Elite Member

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    hahahah why would you bump that? that was fucking garbage, and bs is not to be taken lightly? this is a fucking internet forum...i dont take life seriously, why would i tkae this shit seriously
  3. UnConscious

    UnConscious Senior Member

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    I know yer not talkin ish sketch...
  4. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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  5. GeSuS_KRiST

    GeSuS_KRiST Moderator

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    dont get your whore bitch mother confused with waster u peice of fucking shit... just because your pops never loved you doesnt mean your wothless peice of shit ass has to come one here like every other fake peice of shit thinking they could rap.... get the fuck out here or be forced to leave, last night while u were rapping on here dissing people in MY crew, my ass was haning out with people in music videos signed touring artist rocking shows with them...

    i live the fuckin life u and all these kids dream about... your not better then anyone so get that fucking ego out of your dome...

    punk bitch, i dont even need to spit shit to make you inadequate...
    Last edited: Mar 28, 2008
  6. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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  7. For all those kids on here talkin' like they thugs
    I'm a break it down thuggication style
    This is the only time you'll see me talk about guns and drugs
    Why? Just to show how easy it is to rhyme about......
    Started typin at 11:13 PM

    Here you lay your life is on the line
    Strapped up to machines for one last time
    How did you get here laying in this hospital bed
    Your soaked in clothes covered in red, a hole in your head
    In about 20 minutes you'll probably be dead, killed with lead
    Or instead why the fuck were you in that barrio
    Give the cops your statement, tell them the scenario
    You were walkin with some friends down the street
    When some crazy Jack comes out waving the heat
    Tellin you to give him all you got, you sweatin now you feelin hot
    Dude's screamin now like a tea kettle pot, you thinkin a lot
    You wondering if you'll feel the pain first or see the first shot
    Contemplatin on if this guy gets your scrilla will he later be caught?
    Probably not, so you try to talk, calm him down
    Dudes not fallin for your games he ain't a clown
    So that 9 millimeter he be wavin around,
    You're waitin to hear the sound
    The two friends you are with are frozen in shock
    Their eyes fixed on the shine of the glock
    They know there time is up like the last tic of a clock
    They know dudes just stickin em for money so he can buy more rock
    Thats when you feel a burning sensation the blade of knife
    Oh shit it's chaos now, by the blade is how you're losin your life
    Then you feel a burnin sensation up in your chest, you've been capped
    A bullet wound near your heart, a dude in the dark was strapped
    Now you fallin' down on ya knees, prayin' to God PLEASE PLEASE
    You didn't wanna lose your life this way
    Wishin' you could rewind go back have a Replay
    But instead over a simple stroll at night you lost your life
    To two bullet wounds and the sharp jagged blade of a knife
    Layin' in a hospital bed, hoooked up on life support
    Curious if you'll make it out alive and see the "murderer" at court
    Lookin' at your bare feet they jacked your Nike
    Guess this was your last chance never had a wifey
    Close your eyes, see yourself lookin down the barrel of a gun
    Eyes closed, head down, you're praying like a nun
    You dead now, over being in the ghetto tryin to have some fun...
  8. Kayone707

    Kayone707 Moderator

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    i got bored so i didnt read all that shit...
    i dont play poker, i dont like to bet..
    i have a cat...
    hes black and fat..

    word son.
  9. Passleoinj

    Passleoinj Banned

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    ah shitt , you musta love him really much

    i dont envy you at all , shit look at you
    youre a fuckin crackhead and your beats are whack
    talkin about ego did you hear yourself haha
    you aint livin in cali with a nice house with a pool and bitches for days
    just continue makin your e-life succesful and gettin toys respect
    cause thats all you'll get :)

    and if youre so succesful , why the fuck you aint on the tv
    just another underground broke dude
    and youre really right
    you really do spit SHIT

    aight i'm done here , hurt too many dudes at the same time
  10. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    frankly, i hate most emcees. once they get signed it goes to their heads too fast. i cant blame em though, gettin paid to talk.

    oh well, ill work for my buck an hate emcees an not give a fuck
    cats talkin this an that, gets fuckin irritatin. not many peeps keep it real

    hopefully gesus makes a buck an keeps it real

    word, hopefully passleoinj is outta here by tonight... not that he wont be back with a new account
  11. GeSuS_KRiST

    GeSuS_KRiST Moderator

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    my beats are whack, thats why i sell them to artist who rock world tours right HAHAHAHAHA

    and your right i dont live in cali, i live in fucking miami which is MORE expensive and nicer then cali, with bitches for years, and i have way more then a e-life and i HAVE been on tv my musics been in ommericals in indie movies in graffiti movies, im FAR from broke, i DONT rap... and i get respect for the cats i look up to in everything i do obviously im doin somthing, specially if a lil kid like your is mad and jelious enough of my to hate.... now excuse me while i go fuck your dead whore of a grandmother the sloppy not dried up cunt scab... you waste of life peice of french faggot toast

    and your banned but im sure you'll have another account... why dont you learn shit about me before u try to diss me with things u think i dont do but actually REALLY do do
  12. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    thanks gesus, ive been callin for that for a minute now
  13. SenTheFirst

    SenTheFirst Senior Member

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  14. UnConscious

    UnConscious Senior Member

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    i kno yer not talkin shit man, cuz you wouldnt dis ya broski, would ya?
  15. SBOMBS

    SBOMBS Elite Member

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    gebus when are the luxery cars for....
    i really dont like dedo
    cuz she reminds me this bitch i fucked anal
    i wish i was like in the matrix
    doin my supermaine thangthang and flippin some trix
    i also have 2 cats
    one is gray the other has white paws and a white nose
    i like to creep up on em and treet them like banana-hoes
    my catsz are all thin and horny
    cuz im a broke ass motherfuckin minimum wage workin
    average guy that and im thinkin on eatin'em
    im so bored luckily i get to dream about gebus and his fancy life....
    cuz my bitchez are dirty
    and the cherry-hoes and dirtier....

    put that in your pipe and smoke it
  16. thesilentvandal

    thesilentvandal Banned

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    you think your something cuz you rock the same outline over and over, while other cats are progressing? even if i do say the truth your gonna ban me, cuz im not respecting the rules, fuck you, you think your that much, but do you ever bomb? no, you do the same boring outline over and over, and say its grimmy, grimmy shit is supposed to be clean , you like 22 and fucking crackhead, so i dont even know what you be doing on this site with your ego and your 22.000 posts.

    fuck you and your ego
    im out

    and for you information im not the dude you banned, im one of his good friends.
  17. sketch3

    sketch3 Banned

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    oh no i ment it was good, that punchline u said made me laugh
  18. UnConscious

    UnConscious Senior Member

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    haha yeah, my boys were rollin.
    dude spit out his corona all over my livin room, fuckin clown
  19. Noen

    Noen Banned

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    YO FAGGET, you banned my other account eh? your good eh you can ban people, its not liek that in real life fag, you aint gonna get respect for your shitty outlines, and i know your gonna ban me again, but i have like 50000 accounts. fagget

    see you in hell with waste

    and yo, practice your grimmy style, cuz right now, its total bullshit, like your crack head face ,and your gay ass raps.