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  1. hiddin you suck and all your shit is pre written...get at me KID.
     
  2. Hah!

    and Herbn it would most likely be clear who won or who didn't, although if you wanted to get official, a poll is chill.
     
  3. Small Time Crook

    Small Time Crook Senior Member

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    not that im proud, but im a fuckin alcoholic
    an' you know things is going down when i get to callin
    stallin.. for time
    while i think up a new line
    because everyones getting bored, with the same shit in each rhyme
    side note, to them *****s wearin black and tan
    yawl boys best be hoping i dont see yawl again
    might beat me once, because you caught me by my lonesome
    but ill fling bullets at you bitches, even if i got to throw'em
    alright, back onto the main focus
    i make petty mc's disappear with some criss angel hocus pocus
    mindfreak'em, they tweakin', stop'em from speakin
    make it rain anyday of the year, 'cept holidays and weekends
    i glisten like prisms under bright light
    not because of the mic but because im fuckin' white
    in fact, the microphone is a cold bitch
    treats me like shit, and she spits in my face
    but it's okay, i kinda like the taste
     
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  4. KrazyKrac

    KrazyKrac Senior Member

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    freestylin dis on the duffle bag boy instrumental by lil wayne ..


    big black n dangerous.. my bags a beast homes
    yall get more text in ya bodys.. den ya bithc fone
    lyrically insist on.. disfigurin each bone
    my rhymes haunt ya ... so ull never be alone
    I COME... for the eastend ...when da trash if fulla bodies
    where da bloods originated.. n now killin kids a hobbie
    NOBODY.. knows how our fates sealed..dis real
    deep bruises in da soul from childhood dat wont heal
    putta bounty on ya head make ya da headless horsemen
    with ya dull rhymes... ur demented more den
    a silly little 6 year old.. dat hasnt even grown yet
    u still insist to front like you hard..ur life has no object
    make u loose ur life like druggies who homeless
    u hold less weight... n i just ruthless
    u aint a genious... so dont inisit on ya 2 cents
    aint passed like blues yet... commercial is clueless
    hiphops saviour da don of rap.. come baack 2 bring u to it
    steel city da spot.. east end n Big T da movement
    coutin da minutes.. on da clock movin atta fast pace
    got a full hand of kings ? aint beatin me .. cuz i got full ace
    no place for kids this where the boys grow to men
    da men die young.. n da young get by without em
    no remorse for da weak cuz i bring da revolution
    Che Gevara of rap.. get past i aint losin
    beat more rappers down.. den astronomical figures
    bring a sense of danger like enviornmental pictures
     
  5. UnConscious

    UnConscious Senior Member

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    Unconscious brings infernos, blistering when i burn those
    Who step to me lyrically, leave em trippin like ecstacy
    Next to test these get chopped up with machetes
    Down in the ground 6 feet deep, depleted mortuaries
    Torture, torch and burry my foes, baseball bats pull out facts
    Hats get twisted, end up missin, when your snitchin like rats
    Backs get watched or get stabbed with long knifes
    Can't trust a soul but yourself, thats what we call life
    Its a dirty world, out to get you, better wear protection
    Better be strapped with gats and plenty jimmies for erections
    Bitches will cross you, claim they virgins when they aint
    No condoms in the paint, see pink but miss the taint
    Its obsurd the way my words never hit their target
    Theyre primed and ready to explode but get thatched like margaret
    Skimmed, bit, and stolen like holdin a golden slogan
    Take my shit and youll have to factor your fears like joe rogan
    Hulk hogan, Im a beast in the ring, I feast on your team
    Only time I stop rhymin is when im asleep in a dream
    Check that, thats a lie cuz I rap while unconscious
    Spit a lyrical cyclone, spinnin words makin you nausious
    Be cautious don't step too soon or speak too loud
    Awake the sleeping giant and witness mushroom clouds
    Ask nagasaki, heroshima, all of japan
    I'll drop atomic catastrophic bombs: little boy and fat man
    Fat fans, fat emcees, we are what we eat
    I devour entire record companies at my feet
    My throne is higher than the highest mountain, it lies in the heavens
    But I reside here locally, out front of seven elevens
    I gotta eat so I sell anything that I can
    From amps to watches to movies, even collect tin cans
    Music cd's, ipods, even local emcees
    Promote concerts, events, but nothing is free
    You gotta pay to get my service but don't get me wrong
    If you need some sucky sucky I got the girl for your schlong
    She'll sing you a song while your hittin and rippin thongs
    Bouncin her titties and slappin your balls back and forth like ping pong
    Jokes, but on the real, you need it and I got you
    So many connects in my phone, one tone and they flock through
    Birds of a feather stick together, if your dope, your stuck to me
    Slashin and gashin emcees, verbally murder heards of sheep
    A word with me, words of the wise, I preach factual lies
    Contradicting advice, see the despise in my eyes
    Your like flys, circle around shit, eat it and die
    Hide facts behind your backs, read it in skys
    How can you possibly, whole heartidly, believe in one god
    Or any god for that matter, it all seems facade
    Just a way to escape fate, a sence of false security
    Pure or unpure, sin or not, does it matter, its all obscurity
    Hearing me talk, write or rap a couple thoughts
    Should provoke a million minds to grasp goals never once sought
    I speak of inlightening minds, whether grime, grit, or intellectual
    Hopefully I serve my purpose, stimulate minds beyond just sexual
    Perpetual, I have yet to reach peak so Ill keep climbin
    Rhymin is my tweak, a fiend for verbal hurtles, jumpin and jivin
    Swing to the next tree, a monkey in the concrete jungle
    Bombaclot, Jamacan Don Dada, you don't wanna rumble
    You don't wanna ramp wit me, I taunt and flaunt the cheese
    Call me chester, I'll fester your sores, leave you beggin on your knees
    I switch up the flow, from dirty, to clean, to dirty, im supreme
    The ultimate, the highest seat, my feet crush self esteem
    Extreme on high beams, blindin competition with precision
    Deer in my head lights, frozen, you better make a decision
    Join me or join my enemies, you make the choice
    My voice and words are sometimes slurred but I always show poise
    Fair warning, I'll have you know, the grass is greener on my side
    The finer things in life, no wave tips us, we ride tides
    We jive, slide, our prides high, never slip into slums
    Never changin like bums, always rangin with guns
    Take your jewels to the market and make instant cash
    Were gone in a flash, murk you and surf distances fast
    The past, the present, the future, Im ghostin control
    Take out the next assigned squad when you post up patrol
    I roast up a bowl, stay lifted like elevators
    I'm open to ideas but short fused and snap like aligators
    The last time I was this high and freestyled a verse
    Was the last time I felt alive and keystyled a curse
    Which witch doctor can cure the pain in my head
    Darkening and evil rooted, demonic thoughts, injected with lead
    Neurotoxic, paralyzing your thoughts, your words begin to slur
    Apoptosis, hypnosis, corrosive, a lethal dosage, images blurr
    No longer in control of your mind, you find I'm captain of the ship
    Terrified, locked in shock and blind, this time I napkin your spit
    Catch your drool before ghouls lurk and climb out of pools
    Fool for thinking the wrong, wrong for thinking the fool
    Tools embeded in heads of foolish ghouls thinking they cool
    Nothing left for me to rhyme, so this time Ill use rule
    Fuck it, I'm done, I quit, no more bars for me to spit
    Time for bed, sleepy time, hasta lavista bitch
     
  6. Small Time Crook

    Small Time Crook Senior Member

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    decided to get up on that duffle bag boy instro as well


    it's so easy for people to mention a gangs name in a line
    but they dont even represent a certain fuckin' side
    sure they was raised up wittem, but never turned out
    look at me i got flipped in and im a motherfuckin burnout
    ill split you like a blunt, you get all cut up
    then ima smoke you like what i split
    please dont be a-hatin, bitch
    dont it please you that im evil, and stay reppin Satan Side
    sure I used to call it A-street, up until the name died
    with an old persona
    and if anyone steps through my door that boys a goner
    even tho i dont pack much heat, i got somethin' to defend me from the streets
    cuz *****s out churr, they all just wanna eat some beef
    that im servin, drunkin speech, now im swervin
    on the highway, make it my way, cuz i dont get high pay
    so i gotta hustle a little somethin' somethin' to make my day straight, eh
    i know im kinda off tonight, but a fuck i give naw much
    and *****s still get offended, get they panties in a bunch
    like bananas, in groups they all scatter when i shoot
    because you may be hard but son you aint bulletproof
    hell, even 50 cent lies
    ***** was shot like 3 times
    what happened to the other six that equal the nine?

    not so much tonight, sorry :(
     
  7. FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle

    FrEEk_nine-o-fizzle Elite Member

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    i fuck wiminz so hard i brake thems vertibrae, and leave em lying there on the bed, crippled in pain
    some ppl might think abuse like is quite insane, like i give two shits and a fuck what haters say. i live day to day like most cats live pay to pay, but thats my way, i dont have too much time left to play.

    thats all i got for you mofos for now
     
  8. UnConscious

    UnConscious Senior Member

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    Internet kiddies buckin shots? now thats a mother fuckin joke
    You words must be lies or your just high like D-Lok
    Hide behind cloaks, false personality, on the net you are what you arent
    Claim your hardcore using words like *****, your white and act like you arent smart
    I'll play my part, expose your false and bring the facts
    Cuz the truth is, you internet emcees is all whack
    You don't hop in the cyphers, you can't freestyle of the top
    You take time to think but still sound small like pop rocks
    While I pop shots, my words are hollow points, I take aim
    Squeeze the trigger, watch the hammer explode and spark a flame
    Creativity is everlasting, so call me the circle
    You internet kids is more nerdy than family matters steve urkel
    You talk about the grime and violence that you see on t.v.
    I preach the images in my mind, silencing fake emcees
    So talk about something that you know much about
    You gay emcees, fish out the water, rainbow trout
    Talk about your pride parades and your homosexual raves
    Talk about suckin cock for drugs and sitting on the computer all day
    Ill hop on here and there to see if anythings fresh
    Not to my surprise, technique and I, flowin the best
    Don't stress just step your game up and rap what you see
    Rap about yourself, white suburban homosexual emcee
    Rap about playin sports, drivin, politics, what you see on the knews
    Don't put on the gangster mask once youve downed a few brews
    Be real, true to your self thats the most important thing
    If you don't have money, then don't rap about bling
    If you don't have royalty, then don't rap about kings
    If you can't fly, then don't rap about wings
    It's easy, rap about everything effecting you in life
    The true story, girls, family, just jump in the cyph
    Even if its just you, start flowin out loud
    Don't get down on yourself, lift your head above the clouds
    Shit, go ahead and rap about jesus or smokin the herb
    Pleasure or pain, if your poor, rap about sittin on the curb
    Sippin on some burb, I don't care, I'm just tired of hearin gangster
    When your on the internet sayin this shit, you sound hella wankster
    Be a prankster, rap about jokes you play on friends
    Rap about your life so far and all of the dead ends
    Talk about where youll be here in a couple of years
    5, 10, 20, rap about driving and shifting gears
    Be original, rap something no one else has ever spit
    Don't keep coming with the same lines, loading bullets into clips
    Or killing mother fuckers or slanging drugs to make some cash
    Rap about your family history, your childhood, your past
    Who you would be in the next life or even in previous
    If your demonic and cynical then spit the devious
    But I'm bettin if you were a real killer, you wouldnt be on this site
    You would be out hunting down your next victim, avoiding light
    Creeping in all black, lurking in shadows, following slow
    Cocking back a stolin gat, emptying shells, even reload
    Dump another clip, just not giving a shit
    But the fact is your still here, your whole style is bit
    Fakes will be fakes and the real will be real
    Fakes get found in lakes, while the real kill for meals
    So take my advise and rap what you really stand for
    Shit, rap about graffiti describe to the core
    Give every detail, don't hold anything back
    Just stop rappin about gats and start movin the pack
    Be a leader not a follower, just be original
    Be yourself, your own identity, an individual
     
  9. Hobbes

    Hobbes Senior Member

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    Nowadays everyone has gotta front
    when compared to OGs they just a little runt
    back in the day you could have your own way
    walk down the block and hear bullets spray
    what the fuck is the police gonna say?
    fuckit
    nah they'd rather duck it
    turn their head 'cause they care less whos dead
    but thats all done 'n said, in the past
    'n most them OGs, nah they didn't last
    so why is it today people still like to say
    "i'mma catch you with my gat 'n watch them bullets spray"
    when everyone knows homies just frontin'
    'cause you know homie will be runnin' -when they comin,
    with the real steal, the shit you can feel
    cause a word isn't tangible but much more manageable
    and easy to take back, but once you fire a gun, 'n hit someone then splat,
    ain't no take backsies 'cause you got trigger happy
    forensics nowaday will make sure that you pay for the ***** you just lay
    but in the end its okay, 'cause you lived up to your word
    'n now you act like its fuckin' absurd, you took a homies life just to act trife
    'n now your the one thats doin' 25 to life
    so if you ask me wheres my steel I'll tell you that I'm real
    and my fist is the only thing you'll feel,
    by the time I'm done with you, your gonna wish I had a gat,
    'cause the scars I'm leavin' you will sure as hell last
    but if I can't be the victor in the victory
    then at least you'll see me walkin' around in the streets
    even if you take me, you still cannot break me
    tought like wood, but not invincible
    as long as I ain't hurt bad, I still got principle
    'cause you mighta schooled me, and got a lil rep
    but I'll always get up, 'n get mad respect

    How was that?
     
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  10. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    Ay listen.
    ay listen.

    got bloodstains on my shirt cause ill spit until it hurts.
    blood pissin from my nose cause of vicious flows.
    turned into an alcoholic who listens to diabolics and trunk bumps like hydraulics.
    hit it and forget it,nothin more,grab that 40 and swig it.
    mind of ignorance,can you trick it? or can you dig it?
    flick my bic and your gonna shoot up in flames.
    your just a punk bitch who drops names.
    bitchin about how he doesnt have enough fame.
    Ill sniff out your fine feline like a cocaine k9.
    oops i gave you the wrong bag, now your blowin up fake lines.
    insisting your high,give it another try.
    Im in a mental war and done gone AWOL.
    yeah ill blow that eightball.
    usually nice,but truthfully i just hate yall.
    hey einstein your fuckin dumb.
    stick your face in that bag and dont stop until your numb.
    stay ripped,stay dipped,thats rule of thumb.
    takin everyday as it comes.
    woo i got a tummyache,search for a tums.
    triple stack buddah,stick it under my tounge.
    body goes numb,in need of a hug.
    fuck with me catch a lyrical slug.
    your beat down like the living room rug.
    grab that 40 and chug.
    find a fly cutie and im ready to smash it.
    bash it,mash it,slash it.
    have that bitch tight on the chain.
    we the shit and you just a poopstain.
    youll just fade away in a fatal day.
    so live it as you may.
    kick back,relax,chief on that j.
     
  11. Methree

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    It might take a few readovers to get the flow.

    Hobbes shit was tight, if I might say
    I'd rather read his shit, than yours anyday
    hes like a 100 grand bar mixed in with the hershays
    not frontin, while every other bar is like "plz purchase meh"
    and for an mc, I'm wack and i know it
    im not so proud but ill show it
    cuz i know the production will close it
    at least when my beats hit your speaks
    they'll be original UNIQUE
    leaving you short of speech
    but within reach to think
    about how much you need to cleanup
    cuz your lifes on the brink
    dont let it wash away
    down the drain of your kitchen PIPES
    oh my I went in a different direction than you were seizing
    cuz im sporatic and change with the seasons
    cant direct me i'll drift in this oxygen ocean til im seasick
    I work slow, but think quick
    that's how I managed to insult you ---------------------------------- --------|
    without you realizing it ------------------------------------ --------| (yea these lines suck)
    give a fuck what you ponder
    as long as my resime doesn't include
    1 hit wonder
    if you cant see whats wrong with rap right now you must be
    stevie wonder
    at least we got people workin to restore the name of hip hop
    like the 9th Wonder
    and i wonder how many times i can rhyme wonder with wonder
    well here's another
    I'm slightly super you can call me wonder....
    ..woman.....oh shit.
    Well that's my stab at this freestyle ish.
     
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  12. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    i wonder how many times i can rhyme wonder with wonder?


    what the fuck?
     
  13. As the beat booms from the boombox
    Dudes on the corners sellin' the rocks
    Hip Hop seems to have lost it's way
    New jacks sayin' Em is from back in the day
    They lost their way, 4 elements in Hip Hop
    You ain't gangsta just because you crip walk
    You got the b-boys and the backspin DJs
    And each emcee could rhyme for days
    The movement of Art and Graff
    4 parts equals Hip Hop I can do the math
    Hip Hop, I'm choosing that path
    Rip up the mic, express my wrath
    Scratchin while the emcees rappin
    On the corner dudes is trappin'
    To the sounds of the boombox beat
    The b-boy tears it up, gets you outta your seat
    Burners adding colors to the dead brick walls
    Better than advertisements from the local strip malls
    Hip Hop is slowly on it's downfall, you can see the decay
    We gotta breathe life in it starting today

    ehh, off the dome.
     
  14. "Riot"

    "Riot" Elite Member

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    The teacher,immortal speaker.
    the real mcee,up infront of class takin action.
    up here getting total satisfaction.
    this freestyle shit finally caught traction.
    beat on the bests chest.
    hear that?
    thats the voicebox thatll make your head rock.
    so what if i didnt grow up on the block.
    slangin rocks,havin mad bitches up on my jock.
    you need to realize its almost nine oclock.
    call me jack the rippa,the best.
    puttin whack mcees to rest.
    rip off your shirt exposing your breasts.
    reach into your chest.
    tearing you apart searching for the unfound heart.
    internal physco spittin raging cyclones.
    uneducated man fighting robotic clones.
    you cant spit like your missing chromosomes.
    enough of that im staying content.
    rockin the mic one hundred ten percent.


    little freestyle.
    legit?
     
  15. AnteUp

    AnteUp Elite Member

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    im so horror-core,
    i'll drown your body in a lake,
    and make it sank into the aquifors.
     
  16. Methree

    Methree Member

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    Just having fun.
     
  17. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    written verse.

    i'm the type to fill clips and leave your body with holes
    men in black like will smith and tommy lee jones
    watchin you flow is like a fuckin comedy show
    if your rhymes are so hot, how come the audience froze
    fuck the crowd, i dont stop for applause
    i dont stop spittin until your bodies covered in gauze
    When you tried to diss me, i watched you struggle and fall
    i'm comin to brawl and leave your fuckin blood on the walls
    it's nothin at all...haters on my nutsack, fuck that
    Just refrain to speak my name from that hole below your mustache
    and plus, i clutch gats, trust i'll bust back
    I'll scorch your hair off and leave you bald like Kojak
    You'll be rockin a toe tag, and a brand new hairdo
    fuck with me? I'll leave you stiff like bamboo
    Yo, you're shit is wack, with your crappy gimick rap
    I'll make your lid collapse like I'm stacking fitted hats
     
  18. aeSOP.314.

    aeSOP.314. Senior Member

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    i pull out my weiner and wiggle it around
    its much much meaner than any thug in your town
    tell you girl get on her knee and swallow it down
    so next time i see you, im calling you a clown
    i smoke that dro, so you know it aint brown
    thats the color of my hash, it dont make you frown

    uhh yeah..............hallaluja holla back
     
  19. HëRbN

    HëRbN Elite Member

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    You wanna talk bout hardcore?
    Im somethin like a cannibalistic carnivore.
    Bitch your just a hip hop whore
    Quick to jump on the bandwagon
    You spit shit, i spit flames lika dragon
    so take yo rainbow shoes n that straight bill cap,
    and turn the fuck round cause you dont know the first thing bout rap
    You aint from the streets, never even seen a d block
    thats the hood of the hood son,
    where people pack K's nota glock
    You just think your hard cause you bump 2 pac
    Listen to hidden teknique, cause you need a history lesson
    Hip hop aint a phase man, its a lifestyle its a blessin
    So quit stressin and tryin ta front
    cause we can all tell it aint purp in that blunt
    you jus another internet kid tryin to act big
    cause real recognize real, and thats the real deal
    Theres a few of us on here that spit lyrical steel
    So get a feel, fo who you messin with before you drop lines
    Hidden, Nostra, Crook, unconcious yeah they know whats up
    dont go gainst them less you wanna get fucked up
    cause all you do is talk bout how your gunna buck
    this is the internet fool so shut the fuck up
    Show us you got some skills and quit the act
    Matter a fact, you should just turn round and retract
    and when you get a decent flow come back
    so you can spit back
    cause i dont wanna hear bout how hard you think you are
    or how big the blades are on your pretend car


    lil quicky, directed at no one in general :)
     
  20. Yo it's time for a quick little history lesson
    Because the mainstream scene has me stressin'
    If you a fan of Hip Hop but jam to Lil' Srap
    Then shut your mouth and listen to this rap
    Cause, I'm a bring it back, you cop my shit like it's crack
    And when I speak, it's always the truth in fact
    You cop it from my trunk, and bump it in ya system
    Speakers' thumpin and of course everybody listen
    This shit rock for months up through all of your speakers
    In ya whip and when you walkin on foot in ya sneakers
    Blowin out of your headphones and into your ears
    I might be 17 but I'm far more advanced than my peers
    Emceeing, rapping, scratchin', and graffiti is my knowledge
    And I'll still school ya ass in Jeopardy like I graduated college
    You think you're a gangsta because you fuck with NWA
    When the only member you can name is well...uh Dr. Dre
    Shit, Em was illin' back in his day before fuckin with D R E
    And B I G would be ashamed if he saw some of the dudes on the M I C
    But i'm revivin' this thread, you whack emcees plan to flee
    Never dealt coke, Oxi's, or slanged that fuckin' tree
    Nah never been the type to act hard, I'm not a felon
    Had em on my record for a bit, but not for sellin'
    But now I'm getting sidetracked back to Hip Hop
    You dudes ain't hard either, rockin polos and flip flops
    I like dudes who spit with a real grimy feel like the main man L
    He spit rhymes so hot, the Devil's son, you'd think he's in hell
    But of course if you Hip Hop you could tell
    Instead you bumpin to In The Closet by R. Kell
    Ayo what the hell, then of course you have the legends
    From B.I.G., L, Gang Starr's various rhyme sessions
    Look when I rhyme I'm clear, you have no questions
    I'm seizing your computer among other various possessions
    So you can't come on here typing up something whack
    Then sayin' "A 2 minute freestyle, I'm a thug, I deal crack"
    Bitch, I don't care if you're Asian, Caucasian, Latino or Black
    If you're fucking whack you're whack and I wouldn't lie
    So that shit is real talk, it's fact....