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Discussion in 'General Discussion' started by fame, Nov 6, 2004.

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  1. leftside

    leftside Member

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    you been described as prepackaged
    inelastic, can't flex ur rhymes that's some whack shit
    hit the shadows and lay a trap bit
    launch your nuclear capabilities at me but i inhale it
    *cough* that was a good hit man
    glad u didnt waste it on the likes of afghanistan
    these taxdollars money gets alotted rather funny
    destroyin societies instead of facilitatin to shape them
    that's why we stop hatred with the rhymes we bakin
    freebasin our minds past the muddled puddle u may think of
    multiply our velocities with verbal atrocities
    unique to mankind our vector-based philosophy
     
  2. jez

    jez Senior Member

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    From now on I will be speaking in tounges about trials and tribulations.
    People come from all nations will embrace my creation of the words I spew forth.
    They will chew and choke on the syllables my mind puts together with envy of noone.
    Even the sun will shine down on the young ones running around with barefeet in the summertime old men sitting at the corner on buckets singing hot rhymes with their wrinkled skin telling storys of the bad times and the good

    disgusting... like your yayo abuse.
     
  3. Jugga

    Jugga Elite Member

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    This one is called "Fishy Bitches"
    hope you guys understand the metaphor I'm going for..
    let me know what you think about it...
    I'm thinking about using this one in a performance.
    ------



    Catching this baitfish is mad easy for me,
    You can call me master-baiter..
    Go fishing by myself,
    I’ll see you ‘bout a half an hour later..
    Proves to be boring,
    Still do it on the bi-daily..
    Don’t dress to impress,
    Fly-fish ain’t no fly ladies..
    Need to get off that, though,
    Need the trill of the fight..
    Need to go to the pier where shallow water fish often bite at night..
    Where you don’t really need to sacrifice much time..
    The only hardware you need is a rod and a weak line..
    They tug and pull but easy to bring to the surface..
    Usually got big tails, colorful scales and matching purses..
    The type of fish that you can’t take home to moms..
    Tell her toss it on the skillet, she like,
    “What the fuck you on?â€
    but, you like to have fun for the fuck of it,
    fuck for the fun of it..
    the type of fish you like the catch but cannot fall in love with it..
    for that you got to go deep,
    get yourself a nice boat not a hooptie..
    rolling like that,
    you probably won’t even snag yourself a groupie..
    a groupie is a school fish,
    they usually got power in numbers..
    don’t roll solo like what you looking for,
    cause they usually younger and dumber..
    but you catch one you caught ‘em all,
    and you’ll be piping like a plumber..
    but they probably be slick and slip with your shit while you slumber..
    deep sea-fishing is where its at,
    where the fish ain’t half as dumb as they look..
    they won’t even approach the bait if they don’t think its off of the hook..
    so you need a tackle box full of tricks at your disposal in your arsenal..
    jigs, lures, bait, chum,
    anything that’s possible..
    you get a whole lot of what you ain’t looking for before you get it though,
    effects of a fish net…
    but I really can’t say shit,
    this ahab ain’t found his white whale,
    I ain’t found the right bitch yet.
     
  4. Feliks

    Feliks Elite Member

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    i like it, but the concept it mainstream.
     
  5. Rane *DF* *HM*

    Rane *DF* *HM* Senior Member

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    some hardcore rap shit...i dunno if any of yall will appreciate it, but oh well...





    ________________________________________________________
    jumping from building to building
    police barricading the block
    the sniper rifle is propped
    on one shoulder, pop the head of a cop
    everready with shots
    until the medicals stop, ready or not
    clever to dodge an unwanted response
    i got seven on lock
    and unintelligence by my foes adds simplicity to death
    dilligently impress police, with six to your chest
    resisting arrest...
    by all means im brutal
    situations are crucial,
    sending you a clip you get a toothful.
    police are baffled,
    by the masses i battle
    or rather i gather,
    tortured after in my castle, cadavers
    by the millions
    tanks filled where i killed em
    bullet slugs are drilled into their grills
    and the blood that spills from
    the children are real young, and the real ones,
    i keep locked in steel drums,
    the skin i peeled em and ate meals from.
    dogs roam around and steal some
    so to be fair I kill them, and hollow the body till it feels done.
    expand the range of my sight, to triple my shots
    let the blood drip on the block tight grip on the glock
    you dont have the brain power, to think what i thought
    bullets to your skull....i think you forgot
    that im packin heavy metal and im not talkin bout rock
    a 12 gauge in both hands, you get crippled and fought
    smart minds like mine, make a little a lot
    something as simple as darts in your veins till they rip from your heart
    and i get away with nothing more than a parking ticket
    police totally unaware the infamous marksman did it
    it's a sharp decision on how i mark my victims
    then i spark the witness, and if someone narcs, theyre finished
    they dont notice me, even in close combat
    with blades in both hands, sneak around and disarm cats
    and theres little centrifical force when i make the mystical missles send into you
    and if im caught its a miricle
    and you know imma stay on the scene to splatter police
    physical evidence is ac-tu-al-ly
    one of the most factual things that can happen to me
    and everyone's lackin the heat to attack on the street
    cause you know i got a mac in the jeep,
    and ill blast your ass back from in back of the seat
    I got squads and factions with me
    who would rob and stab when i need
    and if i ask em to bleed
    then they actually heed
    any blasphemy gets em strapped to machines
    i got dogs laughin at me
    but when they actually see
    all the straps that i bring,
    they wont think to massacre me
    it makes me laugh when i see
    the fuzz passin at me
    cause i got guns that could make the worst drug traffickers bleed.

    one.
     
  6. swich

    swich Elite Member

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    i make ya drip red from ya head/
    not blue, instead i have red on my head/
    NY, caps and black timbs/
    icey rims that spin outside the comfort inn/
    i sleep under 3 feet of comfortable skins/
    and grip fuckable skin as the lights begin to dim/
    im gettin kinda graphic, but it still sounds fantastic/
    insanity, i past it, im still livin drastic....
     
  7. Mse

    Mse Elite Member

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    Poetic, furious, and utterly amazing
    Dont believe me ill give you proof when i display steez
    with a voice that isnt heard
    im a mute deaf and blind to the world
    metaphorically showing you what life really means
    its like im socrates and your all platons at my knees
    its multiplying legends mse does things
    aristotel, spinoza, froyd, and democrates
    no one can compare to socrasteez

    by the way if i mispelt a name correct me i keep forgetting english
     
  8. leftside

    leftside Member

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    feelin a lot of that, rane.


    i bust a flood thats dam breaking
    a verbal torrent that u can't withstand, so take it
    so advanced ur art forms foundation is shakin
    structural bones breakin from the flow i'm precipitatin

    face it ur washed up n wasted
    weathered under the sun for too long
    like a weak piece u'r overexposed n fading
    u reached ur limit, lack style ur level's been gated

    edited post-submit
     
  9. Feliks

    Feliks Elite Member

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    open your eyes, im not the idealist
    I dont dream about fantasy, it became realistic
    by power of mind, you can call me Divine
    because words from my mouth are heavenly
    Amen, say your prayers, when you step to me
    stand aside, watch me wind up and bat cats
    confused by contusions, and cracks where the head at
    When you play, youre either with me or against me
    my adivce is pick your teams, and choose wisely.
     
  10. Rane *DF* *HM*

    Rane *DF* *HM* Senior Member

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    Thanks bro, that shit was tight
     
  11. biby

    biby New Member

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    ill kum thru hit ya whip up wit sum shells//
    dat will throw ya v in tha air,quicker than pharrell//
    i got ya wifey, hittin up ma cell//
    talkin bout, "bibs i need dik, kum and give it 2 me well"//
    listen,i pop mines reckless//
    let a fake nigga tryda pop my neckless//
    u'll see holes in tha side of ya droptop lexus//
    and ill make ya whole block just drop like tetris//
    ill have ya brains on ya dickeys,ya lungs on ya ones,and tha same 4 ya kidney//
    listen dont fuk wit me//
    my gun aim is way up there im se serious//
    ill have u bleedin like a bitch on her period//
    wen it comes 2 bitches i got major G home boi im tha man son//
    i run more trains on virgins than richard branson//
    put a bullet in ya nek,im from tha bx das my residence//
    fuk timbs,im on air force ones like tha president//
     
  12. Feliks

    Feliks Elite Member

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    man that was awesome. If only you could spell.
     
  13. the 1 and only ...

    the 1 and only ... Member

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    Money


    Makin dollars, makin dimes, makin pennys for thought.
    I got connections with the big bank selections.
    Towers of the shit, givin me Powers and the Ritz.
    Bouncin in my air forces 1s,
    Trainers by the truck load, trainers by the tonne.


    :blink: ;) ;) ;)
     
  14. swich

    swich Elite Member

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    ima shadow in the south/
    without a shadow of a doubt/
    ill have ya like kanye west, with my metal in ya mouth/
    riskin my life, as im grippin the knife/
    one slit to the neck will open ya nice/
    i got my gat covered in ice, more than my wife/
    youll see that bullet commin in the blackest of nights/
    im outta sight, cuz im dodgen the scope/
    i get more mouth and tounge than a bottle of scope/
    man watch me as i toke, like an indian chiefe/
    when it comes to the dro, im always ready to chiefe/
    the city knows swich one is out harmin/
    and i get more ass than a box full of charmin/
    and got more charms for my chain than lucky charms/
    no need for alarm cuz im bout to be done/
    still i have my enimies starin down the barrel of my gun...
     
  15. Hektik-J

    Hektik-J Elite Member

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    "therell be days when i catch you by yo J's
    chump, best to act like forrest gump, best to ruuun"

    cmoon man. bitin dizzee?? hes not even that good haha :lol:
     
  16. sibil juggalo

    sibil juggalo Senior Member

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    this is gunna be horrible but i guess if anybody wants to help me out pm me

    shes kinda cute and she likes my smile
    thought this would be enough to keep her happy for awhile
    shes kinda dumb in this tv show i feel another re run
    when she smiles back at the sun
    but hey lets do it for the kicks man
    maybe soon theyll stop beating me with rocks and sticks man
    maybe someday shell be mine and i
    can hit rewind and repeat the same lines
    that make me lose my mind
    the same lines that make them flee
    and upturn the land mines
    that ive set
    so i can purposely walk into
    and pass through and put me back together with super glue
    maybe someday you can be me and watch this same tv
     
  17. HeHe!707

    HeHe!707 Member

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    check it out home boys its ya boi from the west//
    im puttin weaklings to rest put your skills 2 the test//
    im the best face it chump//
    or youll be facin the trunk by the bass and the pump//
    slumped and if u get a drop of blood on my carpet//
    thats a real quick way 2 get your body turned into a carcus//
    this shit bogaz silly yall dont know the dilly//
    yall small as tweetie while im doin it big like free willy//
    but on the really u think u beatin me nigga what u smokin//
    fuk around and find your body under a bridge somewhere in east oakland//
    so keep hopein that i aint got the heat tokin//
    i dunno even smoke but im always high kuz my niggaz weeds poten//
    belive me i can make a real emcee look bad//
    imma take u to school so make sure u got your book bag//
    u shook bad i can tell by how u writing//
    and even if i loose the battle we can always result to fightin//
    but man fuk dis shit im out this bitch//
    its friday night mutha fuk i gotta go do some shit//
     
  18. Feliks

    Feliks Elite Member

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    Bump

    just a general drop::

    calm myself down thinking violent thoughts
    Im sick of Verbier and da rich bitch hot shots

    If you aint rich
    You aint cool
    It aint reserved
    Go home

    Fake smiles be worthwhile when you lookin fo free drinks and free smokes
    Flash yo fake smile and make sure he aint broke
    I cant stand the lack of genuine here
    Everyone grins but they givin you the finger
    You wont feel safe unless you was born hea

    Everwhere you turn you got 5 in the back,
    yeah might as well pack a nine
    them bitches be itchin for free fights
    each night
    down at the club you walkin in
    Gotta strut like you own it
    cause if

    you aint rich
    You aint cool
    It aint reserved
    Go home.

    Cuz if

    If you aint rich
    You aint cool
    It aint reserved
    Go home.
     
  19. ASEN

    ASEN Banned

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    I know you're sick of seein' this
    tedious periods of lenience when i get delirious
    i ain't a one trick pony, in fact im the miraculous rabbit grabber
    and like seattle radio without frasier you lackin' grammar
    primetime tv on Fox got me slappin' bladder
    like Macguyver, non-violent ways to escape ya grip
    redirect your darts with a ballpoint and a paper clip
    they say knowin' is half the battle
    you tell that to genius mc's who won't last to tattle
    when they rap to babble, i'm like the malboro man smack the cattle
    and get the herd ahead before the drought sets in
    leave a cleft lip like you catchin your man on mom's left tit
    he ain't in the right place at the right time
    like atoms collide to form me with a face to fight crime
    ain't enough room in this hall for the both of us
    no draw, just me hidden from sight but throwin' coconuts
    hardly hilarious punchlines
    i'm seein' serious toolbox drop like it's lunchtime
    still I gotta finish sometime
     
  20. NOMX

    NOMX Elite Member

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    this thread is so wack