ahem the second one looks better i rekon, i like the letters being a simular height, looking good

 

a few more ideas, need some inspiration

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p.s sorry for the long post

 

I really dont think I should be givin out crits because I dont think I know enough to crit someone elses work lol.. I just started learning about graffiti a few days ago.. but heres mine
crits please?

 

dont do the quotes unless ur tag is THAT nice enough...

 

skar man there all ready like 5 million writes with that name

 

ok, so no quotes, and change the name. xD any pointers for the coming up of a new name?
btw thanks for the crits

 

do something original.
like an acronym.
like i write SARLE$.
it stands for
Seeking A Life Evading Stupidity.
just make up something.

 

dude you realise theres an r in sarles

 

i need some help on my crown
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hmm, never thought of that lol let see what I can come up with

 

Yo CoCo like be original. You Letters that you like to write then mix them up to make your Tag.

 

some one help me with my crown? just some ideas i know its messy..
anyway coco..look at my s..but dont bite it

 

I like your crown...get rid of the shadow or whatever the fuck you were trying to do on the left sides of it and it'll be dope

 

thanks bro

 

no, you dont. don't crown yourself. when i see a crown over a tag i turn into the hulk and smash whatever surface its on. don't regard yourself as a king. sorry to be frank.

 

The crown is the least of your problems

 

i agree crowns shouldnt even be done by the best because they know they are the best and it shows so they dont need a crown

did that make sense?

sandstorm-you should write ur tag in the marker so it wont look so shaky even while practicing

 

crowns are for kings, you arent a king so lose the crown.

 

haha i meant Seeking A Real Life Evading Stupidity.