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meh
apoc- go simple thats..really bad

 

sorry doulble post

 

Thanks, that is exactly what I wanted to tell him, but now he will get to see himself

It says Reptt, do not know why he chose to add a second T on there

 

it'd help if it were rotated right keke, but none the less it's looking pretty good. I'd fix the H tho.
Crits please

 

i like number 2 with the all caps, 5's nice but the M doesnt look a part of it

 

Thanx for the critique guys means allot
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Pretty weird huh but still sick ass style

 

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says NAP, just wanted to keep it simple for now, crits would be appreciated
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quick 1 liners

if u make em right they look sick

 

Nap- try to make your P more defined. Give it it's own line, don't just use the A

 

Thats shits funny! Careful Bro...........

 

Eh.
any crits?

Ahem
3rds my favorite

Aid give the d more definition looks like it says aic

 

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crits please?

 

give crits to get 'em

 

dude make ur letter umm....not together...not a 1line... could look alot better..

 

Some bullshit

 

I like the idea of one line stuff, but it's rare that I see great ones. Work with the letters separately and freak each letter. My $0.02 anyway...

 

The e/3 at the end flows in the opposite direction from the other letters, but I like your letter style, and you have whatever marker you used on this dialed in. ©

 

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