ur C sometimes sorta looks like an L, i dont think the style of your L goes with the O and M, dont think the letters flow together very well

 

a new version of my tag

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looks like it says kapo with a backwards p

 

^^^ that dosent say "kayotix" dose it???

 

my friend wanted me to post these for him and he'd like some feedback on which one is better..

 

^they both look like 2 diff words but i like the 1st one. and any crits on this? my friend said my c looks like a d but whatever.

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^I see what he means. pull the "c" off the "o" a lil bit and you'll have a pretty descent tag goin

 

like jerm said pull it of the o a little im feeling the rest of the tag
and yea it is 2 different names he wants to know which one looks better..

 

luster, the dream one is nicer imo.
fix up the k in the first one and it'll look good too.
he should try writing "casket"

 

Thanks guys, im the one whos tags those are, im just a retard and dont know how to post flix

Anyone got anymore input or crits?

 

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also killed a buswith like 6 tags and a bench park and a few bathrooms i need to flick those probaly wont be able to

 

because i feeling like extra nice here you go jaskal. nothing special but a way to look at your name dif. way
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and some more gupey gupeness
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gupe ur tags look clean, and no my tag doest say kayotix, it says KAYO

 

My shitty handsteez.

 

bigger pic?

 

Maikrt
Thinking about dropping the t.


Going for a phillyish style

any crits?

Sear top left is best imo

gupe it looks nice
But second one down on the bottom your u looks like a y

 

if you want to go for philly handstyles make em longer

good work though

 

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critique my tag, i want to get better.

 

seriously? you want to get better?

crit someone else's tag.