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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.
what the fuck do you think graff is?
libra, that first one is ill. nice flow to it.
The s looks like a wierd k or a b
and the r i kinda wierd looking
good stuff jers
the j and e are good sizes.
heres a old tag...love doing simple tags but having dripz
Lose the arrow
Or put it somewhere else
and make the d the same size as the othr letters
and the dot on the i looks kinda wierd to me
It's pretty nice though
i'd say ditch that curle thing on the side of the O and make the D a little more curvy and for the top of the I i'd say make a cirle instead of a little dot, All this tag needs is some dramatic features
new handstyle for new name
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pretty blurry, but looks decent. i dunno if thats the style your going for, but spreading the letters out just a bit could help.
i just like my letters scrunched together like that..i dunno why
yeah thats a style you could go for... it just might look a bit flowier when they're not squeezed together... and independant, i kind of like the arrow... it looks quite fresh inside the O, idk... id have to agree with mr. Yarbles on the other things though.
ok my tag...
any crits on this one?
hateraid you got an other less blurry pics?
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id work with your 4th one..it flows until it gets to the Y..which i dont think fits any of them
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and no..ill have better pics later..im at work and i got bored so i took those on my camera phone
and acos...that tag looks nice
man that tag is on point man keep at it. there isnt anything i can say bad about it that you can fix.
Diso: Keep the D the same size and lose teh long arm off that arrow.
Joga: through the bad quality it looks ok. better flick?
Kayo: I like the style you're going for. The two Ks on the left i like.. although work on getting that O to match.
Acosone: The second O needs a little work.Otherwise, you're definately on the right path. keep practising!
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I'm sad to say but very f**king excited to announce my new name
used to write Adre now I write Damen
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lose the halo. you dont have to connect every letter to the next, they CAN connect, but they should still be able to flow without a line connecting them. besides that... work more on your D and E. then you could have a good starting point for a tag
A bit of steez
damen your m,e,and n are spaced out to much puh them in
Lose the arrow extension on the n
If you're going to have a halo make it small not the size of the whole tag
They're dope as fuck
and you're like the only one who gave anyone crits
Looks real nice keep it up
uhm... am i in the right place..?
maek: Thanks for the props. The first one is nice! Would love to see it done in a thick marker. Would be dope. The second one is a little sloppy.. watch the E and K. Also, perhaps lose the underline for now, it's a little distracting.
same: nice up!! 'nuff said.
Damen - The straight letters style doesn't work too well there, try rounding shit offalittle to make it flownicer.
Same - Dope spot, tag doesn't look right to me though for some reason.
Some I did yesterday. Still not perfect, kinda simple but it's getting better. First pic is best IMO, used a fatter cap and thick paint and it came out nice. Gonna use a fat cap all the time in future.
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what a waste..you should have bombed that
*and to nine...what the hell are those lines next to your tag..it looks like a 9 with some random line going through it..imo i would get rid of that..but do what you do
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