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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.
It's coming off the e, into a 9 and underline.
maek: i like the first one the best. kinda oldschool style.
nine9: i agree with hater, i see where your going, but if you choose to keep it it will need some workin
taggage. these are done on a tablet, so the width is obviously a little messed up.
Alright thanks to everyone who critted me
I'm gonna keep the top style
But here's a slightly different one
shun last ones best, it' got the best flow and the best letters imo
try and make your u and n a bit bigger
nine I can see what you're going for
But the whole 9 at the end needs alot of work if you're going ot keep it
Other than that though I think it looks pretty nice
Nine, I like it, I'd just lose the underline thing.
Uh... I meant to fit the letters more tight and close together but I guess I was thinking otherwise when i did it. Crits, anyway?
Edit: It reads CERS.
Nine9- Im feeling it, but you need to work on a little bit better of can control. Also i think that tag would look sick as hell flared.
SELF BUMP for crits.. Appreciated.
Bumping that too cause it's awesome.
Alien...the one in the bottom right... bring the lettering closer together, I think it would flow better
crits on my tag???
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^ I think with a wedge tip pen that might look better. You got a nice little flow with all the letters, but I think it can be tidied up a bit.
That WAS w. a wedge tip nib...
any more crits???
maek: those are sick man, keep it up.
alien: waaaay too much goin on right now. keep it really simple, and i mean REALLY simple. your style will be better for it in the long run.
maso: the halo on top of the A looks sloppy to me, and the S and R could use some workin, they dont really flow as well. overall, i thing it looks good, keep at it.
Um....try not making ur tags tall? Idk.
Shun: on your 2nd tag, you see how the 's' goes into the 'h'... get rid of the crossbar on the 'h', just use the point on your 's'
...if that makes ANY sense... it's a miracle...
no, dont do that, thats cheesy as shit.
ok, so what would you suggest? let's see some of your shit.
that is cheesy.. he's making a tag not a logo...
ok, great, but where is your input, mouthpiece?
Hai, kan eye git sum critz? kthnx.
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