[Broken External Image]:http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m9/kimchispwr/septa.jpg Crits Please!!It says Septa if you cant read it. I need help on a "t" and a "p." yarbles::Looks fresh... Resk:ractice more, looks like regular handwriting. Lasik:ope shit... common::your shit is plain as hell, keep practicing.
noxi- try a rounded loop on the P, maybe that will help. It will make it flow a bit better too. also on the first one, fix the a so that the top line doesn't connect to the loop on the left side, if that makes sense
A couple more pen tags. Septa Lose the dot in the p and make the square part alot smaller Make your t uppercase Lose the wierd attatchment on the a
keep ignoring my shit bitches =) haha just messing tell what you think of my new stuff [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00390.jpg?t=1215708236 [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00367.jpg?t=1215543045 went on a building site and found some line marker so went tacking footpaths in my town that shit is funny and will stay for a long time =] [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00304.jpg?t=1215542085 [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00312.jpg?t=1215542126 [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00314.jpg?t=1215542151 [Broken External Image]:http://i224.photobucket.com/albums/dd224/rsakens/DSC00366.jpg?t=1215542956 thats enough for now =]
Aiite thanks. Ill try and post a pic later tonight of what you guys said. edit:: [Broken External Image]:http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m9/kimchispwr/noname-2.jpg I kinda messed around with it and did what modes and yarbles said. shits fresh yarbles and same with keane. And WOE, try changing the E a bit. Looks sick other than that.
woe-the E reminds me of some clockwork orange shit, like alex's mask. what i mean is don't extend the middle too far out... septa-just keep on workin mang remos-not diggin the last, whatever that is, looks like an unfinished heart :/ keane-dope shit for real yarbles- alot better than i could do, but im not diggin the S, looks like a music note er somethin secks- not diggin the stye too much, and make a new word, you're not a master
yeah i feel you guys on the E haha changed it up..still fucked up the fucking E =.= maybe jsut do a lower case one? or does this one match better if i shorten the middle?
septa either the top left or the bottom farthest to the right, keep it simple, none of that 4 stuff. my shit
woe Make your e taller looking it looks a little short for a tall hand Extend the first storke of your e past the middle and don't push the middle out too much Lose those lines around your halo and add some kind of philly arrow in there or something looks kinda plain Also I havn't realy seen too many lowercase e's unless you're trying to script It's getting there Philly's confusing as fuck just keep at it