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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. terower

    terower Senior Member

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    Dopeness, FEN. That really flows well... nice job.

    Three I just did for critique:
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  2. main2kNup

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  3. -testify-

    -testify- Senior Member

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    ^ i like that 5th one just dont make it so cramped cause i can barely even find the leg on the i and heres mine
    [Broken External Image]:http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/4025/tagpj4.png

    this is all i can upload right now the problem is it sucks but crits anyway :p it says pask and the a is lowercase...way too cramped i no
     
  4. sank one

    sank one Senior Member

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  5. Fixion

    Fixion Senior Member

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  6. Fixion

    Fixion Senior Member

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  7. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    ^^^to plain. give that shit some balls :p

    and main2kNup: all i see is m scribble n. and they all look the same are u trying to do that? i guess try to make the a and i more defined while keepin your style.

    just my opnion. :D
     
  8. Fixion

    Fixion Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:http://img149.imageshack.us/img149/4366/ballsaxph4.jpg
    :D

    Ohk out of all seriousness. How do i give it balls?
     
  9. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    hahaha, nice. well to me it just looks like plain handwriting. get a dry erase borad or go steal some phonebooks or something cheap and write till your fuckin hand falls off and your fingers are bleeding. see what looks good, and what looks bad. try to improve on that. look at a handy u like and elaborate on it. make it yours. i guess thats what i mean by giveing it some balls.
     
  10. FEN the HEN

    FEN the HEN Elite Member

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    little can emptying
     
  11. sank one

    sank one Senior Member

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  12. bouncingsoul

    bouncingsoul Elite Member

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    Fen, I cant read it... Like I can read some but it's confusing as a whole... I love what I can see of that throw on the right

    :edit:: Sank, keep working on dem letters... The bends in the Aa don't look too good...

    Two new handies for my new name swet2... Dunno which one is better

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  13. crash2122

    crash2122 New Member

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  14. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    something along the lines of this fixtion. had like 10 min from break at work. just try to make it look like u want it to.
     
  15. terower

    terower Senior Member

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    Oh, yeah, I know, bro. That's just the one I've been using recently. The line through it isn't supposed to be the main thing, just an add on. Like, it's not supposed to be a dollar sign, but rather an S with a line through it for flavor.... I don't always rock the line, but that was what I was feeling today.
     
  16. -testify-

    -testify- Senior Member

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  17. Hot_Pocket

    Hot_Pocket Senior Member

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    Crits for all!
    Fen, I'm diggin' it but the letters don't show up to the eye unless you really try and find it. Move 'em a bit apart? I'm not really sure.

    Bouncing Soul, I like the first one the most, but the W looks kinda like an N, the second one, the E looks kinda like an A.

    Crash, you're already at a good start, just start noticing other people's styles and work from there, your letters already show some of your own style, keep sketching.

    Fube, I don't like the big loops at the bottom, and your letters are kinda weak and.... whats the word? Shaky? But I kinda like your N

    Pask, I would get rid of that little extension on your P, and make the loop bigger to kind of fill in for that, I like your A, but the S is sinking down. Your K is looking a little funky, I'm not a big fan of the bottom leg going up then back down.


    Yay, toy crits!
     
  18. Fube

    Fube Elite Member

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    ^^^thanks for the ctits but i did that in literaly 5 seconds, also it was just an example on how to elaborate with "fixtion's" tag. if i spent more time on it, it would have been more balanced out. it says fixion
     
  19. Fixion

    Fixion Senior Member

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  20. jonowev

    jonowev Senior Member

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