Thanks obseen.

I think your S is just like hanigng out by itself. It doesnt really fit the style... The N is a little squised and the arrow looks like it's retarded. I like the "one" at the bottom though. Just fix those and it'd be sweet.

 

i like the 'a' but that 'k' is used my everyone... [/b][/quote]
haha i know ive been trying to come up with a decent original k forever

Would it look better if I made the ks lower leg on the right more circular like the s

 

Can I get some crits?

 

i don't like how the arrow is squiggly i like the f though but whats the little circle coming off the f? i like the charac

 

Go simpler. As of now, it doesn't look good. I especially don't like the loop on the end of the F and the lines above the I's. Just write it out FIXION and then go from there. Don't try to get too wild about it up front.

 

I did it plain(if you search the previous pages) but some dude said it needed some balls

 

Alright, I checked those out, and my suggestion remains. Do 'em real even like. As close as you can to this: FIXION. Once you begin to get an understanding of how letters are built, you can begin to get crazy with it. Just practice baning out that simple one until you have it down, and you should naturally progress.

Handstyles are sorta stupid to critique, though. You just have to learn how letters work, really.

 

Updated handie

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...And fixion, try not to connect your letters and stuff, most of the time it ends up looking like shit. I don't really know what else to say but work on it.

Advice for people trying handies and stuff. Handstyles have styles too. Think of some signifying theme like mine are slanted to the top left and stuff. Just random ass letters that you think up along the way won't get you too far. You have to keep all your letters in mind as you do the handie. Keep in mind how it'll look as a whole and you should know all your letters before you draw em out. That's why you should have an arsenal of letters already. Like mine

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Hope that helped...

PS- DON'T BITE

 

thanks

 

hers some i did with my new marker
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I like the second from the bottom best. The others I don't like because of the long extension of the R and A... Keep it on the same level and it looks cool.

 

we need more illegal tags in this thread, im sick of looking at sharpie blackbook tags.

 

sorry fen heres another one i did
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crits

 

Thats really whack.....

 

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Crits on it so far, just tried a new style for myself.

 

you're saying thats illegal?

it's clearly on carboard

and wack as fuck

 

old tag just got the flick from friend.
messed up K.
w.e

 

looks pretty simple n good to me...Ebk is a crew right cause where I live EBK means EveryBodyKiller used by crips or bloods n what not. But you were right the K is pretty dangling.

 

Hey im a new writer. and i write kace.
if anybody has any advice for me it would be much apreciated.