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Fitzy, I don't know if I'm reading it right but it looks to me like it says "fuse" and the tag really isn't too bad, it's just that the E kinda looks like an afterthought. I think the tag could go without the line through the S, and the extensions on the U, also, try to find a way to make the E seem more connected.
ya...loose the extensions and try to round out the "e" a little so it flows better with the rest of your letters. [Broken External Image]:http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/6994/scan0012rr0.jpg crits cause it got overlooked....
Good shit. Maybe have the points on the M and the N a little more exaggerated so they go way down past the underline. I think it'd look good
I'm not one to usually do that. Anyways to Sage and Atesk: Atesk, kinda hard to read but it looks nice. I don't like the halo, they just always look out of place to me. I would try making the star at the end a bit bigger. Sage, keep working on it dude, it needs a lot of work, I don't want to sound like a prick or anything but it's the truth. Try looking at pictures of tags and see what makes their tag a 'tag' if you know what I mean, try to incorporate similar aspects (without biting) into your own work. Fitzy, I agree with fsmith on that one. Also try and make the 'F' a little simpler too. Then it would be a nice tag. And bump for my pic. [Broken External Image]:http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/handy5.jpg
You're the guy from NZ right? Both those tags are nice IMO. I'd fix the 'M' up on the second one though. What marker did you use for the first pic? Oh, and was your name inspired by the band, oldschool hardcore punk band? [/b][/quote] Yeah I'm that guy.. I know the band, name wasn't inspired by them, just inside jokes. That second style was pretty much made up on the spot, so it looks pretty stupid. As long as it ain't straights.. For the first pic I used a big poster marker racked from paper plus, don't know why you'd want to know that.. but yeah
I'm not one to usually do that. Anyways to Sage and Atesk: Atesk, kinda hard to read but it looks nice. I don't like the halo, they just always look out of place to me. I would try making the star at the end a bit bigger. Sage, keep working on it dude, it needs a lot of work, I don't want to sound like a prick or anything but it's the truth. Try looking at pictures of tags and see what makes their tag a 'tag' if you know what I mean, try to incorporate similar aspects (without biting) into your own work. Fitzy, I agree with fsmith on that one. Also try and make the 'F' a little simpler too. Then it would be a nice tag. And bump for my pic. [Broken External Image]:http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r267/denimg/Graff/handy5.jpg [/b][/quote] im really feeling that tag...
That's cool you know the band. Haha fair enough, straights marker tags annoy me, straight paint tags don't mind me, I;ve seen some nice ones when pulled off well. Just wondering about the marker cause it looked drippy, don't see drippy tags often around Auckland.
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Yeah and gawd aweful tag too! [/b][/quote] can`t you just gif me hints or make me a nice tag instead of just burning me down?
other places i piece arent really public.. this place is somewher ive only been before once and never painted at all, until now, and its pretty public. so yes, yes i do. and i do dubs in loads of other spots i just dont post them
A way to get good flare is start close then trail off when doing the edge of the tag... The best paint for flare is Montana Platnum And I think it could look better, use a better style rather than a simple one.