Drop the extensions on the letters, drop the circle on the "I", make the "A" upper case, take off the extensions on the V, C and S. and move your letters closer together. Also lose arrows and speech marks.
The style I done for spag isnt my style, its just to help him get a simple flow, to be honest im only here to help and your tag is not nice but your getting there, you need to just take in advice from people who are better than you at certain things, and ignore people who are worse tha you.
ugh...could i have some crits on these..!! my first flare so i kept it simple...and i just noticed that sum dickhed went over a really old tag of myn with a mop..aahaha..wanker...the shit was horrible anyways...and its was an extremely tight place to do anything.. :angry: View attachment 272984 View attachment 272985
yeh work on ur handies. first. put that ras flava into it. dont make it look like ur keyboard. look borrin.
Maybe it's a sign... from god! Yeah work on ur paint and can control... don't do flares with skinny's unless you know what ur doing... do flares with NY fats, cuz they are sofa king rad. i'll post my stupid thought up in a second tag in like an hour or so, cuz I am just about to get done my classes today, then I am gonna go flic some stuff I did downtown.
yo man :lol: you heard from tonker tonk? he writes yarps now init, when his lard ass actually gets a whip we'll go fuck shit up!! i bin bombin 40 man, keep ur eye out!! h34r:
Heres me displaying my toyness. I was all drunk, and I had to try the kiwi mop I just made. First time using a mop, but definitely not the last, I gotta say I enjoy this mop. [Broken External Image]:http://img53.imageshack.us/img53/592/img0083cv6.jpg super simple And remember, buzzed driving IS drunk driving.
its ok, like u said its simple but whatever if theyre done properly simples can look good. but i dont like the lines or the N
Ya its supposed to be a lower case n but it ends up looking like a backards capital N. What would you recommend, round it off more? Whats wrong with the lines? Too sloppy?
try thin yur paint a lil more and i was talkin about the lines under yur tag, probably look better with more drips