hoodsup, work on that jelo tag, make it have more flow and remember not 2 overdo it when adding the halo, question mark/underline and the speech marks around your tag..just one would do, but thats my opinion..practise though
[Broken External Image]:http://img61.imageshack.us/img61/6067/graf216zj5.jpg Doin some cappin. [Broken External Image]:http://img236.imageshack.us/img236/1776/graf217ov6.jpg fucked up the R Jelo:Move the explanation marks out a bit. Monday seems a bit to long, and Y's are gay to work with on a bomb.9from eprsonal experience.) Dibs:i love that K
rayseone - Dope shit man, but it needs a little something to bring to the top of it. Its just kind of a flat line, add something there. Cesp.one - Ummm, lose the quotes, move everything closer together, and make it stand out a little more, that tqag looks like its beent here for a couple years Dibz - sick, i love that marker size, its perfect. Dankstar - Looks good, but I might stick with what you have. Jelo - Lose quotes, especially the ones inside the O, then work on structure, its looks plain. Capitol - Bottom looks good, except the middle letter or letters, i cant really tell. top one looks like it might be sick, but its also kind ahard to see nuf1 - IDK which one is yours but they're both sick.
capitol there no way you should cap anyone with that, the shit you capped looks WAY nicer than your shit
Trash I like it, nice handstyle [Broken External Image]:http://img513.imageshack.us/img513/5957/2105072308kt8.jpg Crits?
HEY CAN SOMEONE DOO A REALLY CRAZY TAG FOR ME CAUSE MOSTLY NONE CAN DO THIS TAG NICE ITS HARD MY TAG IS VAPR PLEASE MAKE IT LOOK NICE AND ILL DO ONE BACK!!!!
[/b][/quote] Bumpizm! Zero - Nice simple man. Good start Cert - What the fuck? NO LOVE HEARTS! NO SMILEY FACE. WRITE NORMALLY AT FIRST! Dim - Fucking sick flair brahh. Post more pics! Crits people!
and please don't use all caps either, just post some of what you can d and we'll give you some feedback