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Its not actually that great to post up, I know that the "E" Looks messed up, but it doesn't usually. I tried a diffrent style of a "K", and threw on a halo above the "E". I thought about crossing an "x" inside the "O", but I thought I'd post this up first. Any crits would be great.
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Orket, reasonably simple which is always a good start but try and loosen up a little, throw some curves in there. tonentink, middle picture left tag is probably the best. I don't wanna sound like an arsehole but I don't think you should really be 'toppin toyz' unless you have good reason to do so. From what I can see their tags don't look too bad. Kode, same as what I said to Orket. Some, top left is the best, the S isn't too shabby, try and flair out your other letters a bit to match, they make the S look like a lone ranger if you know what I mean.
Alright, planning on doing this handie in between to fill up that space "True to your roots" Kinda sloppy and the letters need a biiiit work. Oh well View attachment 284952 Putting it in between here by the way View attachment 284953
Yeah, the "True to your roots" was kinda hard to read until I knew what it said. And the pic looks nice. Any crits on these? And one of my crew that I haven't experimented with since I got into it.
^dude fuck that if you want to write kode write kode, its a good beginning name with easy enough letters. EVERY name you can think of has been taken, that part doesnt matter, just take the name and make it your own. its not your name that counts, its the style behind it.
this is me fucking around with new words and trying to make SOME a little better and bringing back BLK for a little crits? [Broken External Image]:http://photos-c.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_667718_8182.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://photos-b.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_667717_7930.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://photos-d.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_667719_8432.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://photos-a.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_667720_8680.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://photos-b.ak.facebook.com/photos-ak-sf2p/v81/191/95/883910653/n883910653_667721_8928.jpg
Esco, those are really illegible bro, I have absolutely no idea what they say. The bottom line starts off looking like 'desa' and ends up looking like 'C@s2'. That's the first thing I'd working on if I was you, just getting your stuff a little more legible. Bouncing, The 'Roots' is really fucking nice. Same with the 'To'. They 'yours' is nice as well but to me it needs a little more spacing, esp. around the 'y'. The 'True' is good as well but looks like the top bar of the 'T' needs to be pulled out on the left a bit, and maybe curve out the 'R' a little more. Very nice. Kode, same as what I said to you before, just keep practicing. Degausserr x, same as what I said to Kode before, just try and loosen up a little, throw a little more curve in there and just keep practicing.
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kode - i'm not really diggin the x in the O and the D is a little weirdly shaped. i would work on those 2 letters and try a bunch of different k's since you can do alot with it dega - the E in your SOME handy doesnt fit with the SOM but the SOM looks good. jroc - the letters seem kinda plain and your N kinda looks like a U in that one. i dont know if the big dot on the left was intentional but it doesn't look good there. i would say jus get a little more funk in your letters.