Hungr - That last one looks sick with all the drips. The R is dope Core is heaps better than Mage Core - Hard to crit because there's not heaps specifically WRONG with it... it's pretty much in proportion and consistent with shape and stuff... You could work on making your letters more interesting. Maybe change the round part of the R and make the E one stroke instead of two. Try fucking with serifs (the little tails on the end of letters). Maybe on the E or the C.
NewGraffer905: i like it keep working on it and it will look ill. i think its good for something basic though. personally my handstyle is wack. guess i just have to keep working with it. just keep it up. hungr: im really feeling your style its hot. i really love that last one nice drips. did you make your ink or buy it? cause i really need to make/buy some. umop.ap!sdn: your hand is ill. "exist...: keep working with it maybe take the wing off of the top of the K. Fube: shits ill as always. really nothing else to say about it.
thanks, i watched that part like 3 times today, enem is awesome everytime i watch it core curve the bottoms of the c and e alike
hungr the last one is prtty good.fube thats mad what marker did u use. whahappen, im not that into it its to frilly. RUP'E
I think Core is better. On Tonic lose the flair at the start of the T. It looks a bit forced and out of place. But otherwise i'm liking it. Tag with a new marker and ink i just made. Sorry the inks a bit weak. View attachment 285844
bump for crits cause the only person who crit(ed?) was maso. ark i like it. the flow is good but i would say that maybe you would want to thicken up the ink if thats possible? i dunno if thats just me.
Second time paintin my tag not writtin Done with german outline not fatty so it was hard to get the flares right Anyways crits [Broken External Image]:http://aycu29.webshots.com/image/20108/2000517242811698809_rs.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://aycu04.webshots.com/image/18443/2000580427690411416_rs.jpg
^^^bump for hungr. [Broken External Image]:http://63.210.199.180/03/70/5/37054.jpg.fpx?qlt=70&wid=144&cvt=jpeg ^deees. round 15 bucks at any craft store, vice: looks like the same thing written over and over. practice makes perfect they say. i guess my question is, do u like it? do u think its your best? what type of crits are u lookin for? most times if u dont get crits u need to try harder and do something better. dont just scribble something down and expect everyone to give u advice on it. keep goin untill u do something that u feel is "ill" and post that. any advice i would give u now is look at the big boy forum and take a look at some handys u like, dont bite em. use them as an influence untill u get a style thats all your own. developing a nice handy that u can do on a consistant basis with any word is difficult. takes a lot of time and dedication. if your not willing to do that then u might as well quit. just keep at it. imitation is the best form of flattery. but not bites. remember that.
WITH FACES good or eh..? [Broken External Image]:http://img412.imageshack.us/img412/9981/picture133rf4.jpg i like these next 2 [Broken External Image]:http://img178.imageshack.us/img178/84/picture132ny8.jpg dusk lose the addons and make your letters more proportioned stak the t could be mistaken for an n
well happen. due to your crits u gave just now. your "philly" style could be mistaken for someone droppin a blue sharpie repeatidly on some notebook paper. to each his own. if u like it thats fine. but i dont. i didnt like the infamy philly shit eather. guess im not a fan.
alrigity now... i was messin around with ma letters and i came up with this. and if you cant tell im trying to decide which type of T i like best. edit: im a dumbass and forgot to post the pic... [Broken External Image]:http://i3.photobucket.com/albums/y88/chickenguy12/062707_19031.jpg
vice, baby, take fube's advice. Get some inspiration, have an idea what you want- should it be all pointy and shit or is it gonna be all loopy, etc.? Then get a few chisel tips and practice. don't just do a bunch, put thought into each letter. (not only thought, try to 'feel' the letter.) Try practicing different words and don't use the same letters all the time, learn to re-create letters at will so that they'll flow with the other letters. Doing a ton and then posting them's not gonna get you anywhere.
Vice i like the first one the best out of all of those. Most of the rest look to sqaushed up together and it looks forced.