Kabs, your letters are kinda sharp. In a bad way. The tag is jagged and doesn't have much flow... Hit the basics, work on a super simple letter style and just rock that for awhile. Like basic printing with just a tiny touch of flair. Not trying to rag on you, trying to help. Kaze I like it. Nice and simple, just keep experimenting and practicing. Love the Remo, needs a little work on the shape of the R. The kaze needs a little work on the k, try angling the top arm up and shortening it and loosing the tail on the R. Still working on this style, I really like how its turning out. Might actualy start using it soon. Any critz on it would be great. Short version. [Broken External Image]:http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/1927/geski9nh2.jpg Tall version. [Broken External Image]:http://img214.imageshack.us/img214/8800/geski10xa7.jpg
quicke on b-room door. messed up on the u. ill take some more and better pics when i drop one on paper. anyways Dusk [Broken External Image]:http://aycu33.webshots.com/image/45912/2003466988448540535_rs.jpg
i need your help i want to combine somehow those tags into one tag [Broken External Image]:http://img218.imageshack.us/img218/6586/tagsov6.jpg and i know it sucks (the tags)
here to save the day [Broken External Image]:http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh115/Rhelicks/1119744527_76e697ea66.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh115/Rhelicks/Photo-0126.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh115/Rhelicks/Photo-0125.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh115/Rhelicks/Photo-0145-2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i254.photobucket.com/albums/hh115/Rhelicks/neuf3.jpg View attachment 344227 crits?
View attachment 344379 Handystyle for a battle on another forum. Eack yeah those lower case E's aRE nasty.Make the middle bar bend less.
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drakula- id say lose the extension on the left of the F devoted - thats pretty nice i like the S, has some good style. only thing is "DUSK" might be a pretty played word eack - those need alot of work, completely scrap the top one and fix the E on the second one. the third could look ok if you cleaned it up a bit and fixed the S.. personally i dont like it when the back tail goes further back than the top bit, looks kinda bad and lose the extension on the bottom of the A, just use a bar across the middle kaze - id say they look pretty good, nice n simple, just make the letters a bit closer together heres some of mine.. [Broken External Image]:http://img442.imageshack.us/img442/6404/feb1779hs1.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img254.imageshack.us/img254/3870/feb1780gz6.jpg old word.. did this a while back, as you can see the can shat itself [Broken External Image]:http://img341.imageshack.us/img341/4451/feb1781rg0.th.jpg
here is some stuff i did, i suck so go easy haha [Broken External Image]:http://i62.photobucket.com/albums/h111/shado_02/1203215090.jpg
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OK im brand new to this site and all i have to say is this is badass. i have some tags i just did in my book that need to be critiqued because i just changed words a week ago and this tag is not built up yet.