yeah i feel you this ones a bit more flowing [Broken External Image]:http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/9782/cimg0170yo4.jpg
fuck yea! try to move your halo down, so it looks like its being supported by your letters. feeling every single thing except that little loop. i like the way your o comes out though.
ive worked on this for about 2 days its still rusty but id like crits thanks... [Broken External Image]:http://i246.photobucket.com/albums/gg102/CircaDrummer/20080218_2.jpg it says "Soboe" by the way
i like the flow. dont like the loop in your s. and try and make your halo more round, not so much straight. id put it lower too. and your underline is so straight. loosen it up abit. flows nice though.
dark your name makes for an easy one liner that would look sick keep working on it tho all your letter can connect easy just pay more attention to local graff and work from there
new to the game, looking for some feedback [Broken External Image]:http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v325/district5rookie/IMG_0768.jpg
bro to be completely honest i cant even read what it says.. do it simplar and make ur letters stand out more
new name crits needed D5 - restart, do simple letters dim - flows pretty good, keep it up smik - i like it, good and readable. dont like the e tho
try and make your r capital. and when your p and e join em, it makes it look like an s. try and fix that up abit.
ah boobs, i can make out a P E and an S but thats it, simpler like said said after that, just work on flow because thats what i think makes a tag, then letters come naturally, when you get new ideas and so on. -.just kidding i dont see and S anymore. x]