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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    werddddd!


    .. and revid, it looks abit stiff n shaky.
    try n work on your letters abit
     
  2. revid!

    revid! Elite Member

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  3. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    fuck yea!
    try to move your halo down, so it looks like its being supported by your letters.
    feeling every single thing except that little loop.
    i like the way your o comes out though.
     
  4. Soboe!

    Soboe! Senior Member

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  5. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    i like the flow.
    dont like the loop in your s.
    and try and make your halo more round, not so much straight.
    id put it lower too.
    and your underline is so straight.
    loosen it up abit.
    flows nice though.
     
  6. smikoer

    smikoer Senior Member

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  7. Darkeist

    Darkeist Elite Member

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    bump, got no crits
     
  8. MiNZ

    MiNZ Senior Member

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    dark your name makes for an easy one liner that would look sick keep working on it tho
    all your letter can connect easy just pay more attention to local graff and work from there
     
  9. j-f

    j-f Senior Member

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    i would change the E up and the first R shorten the extension on its leg
     
  10. Cyto Aka Son1c

    Cyto Aka Son1c Elite Member

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  11. dim

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  12. Cin123

    Cin123 Senior Member

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    dim- your tags are 2 die for:p
     
  13. D5Rooke

    D5Rooke New Member

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  14. scoot

    scoot Elite Member

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    bro to be completely honest i cant even read what it says.. do it simplar and make ur letters stand out more
     
  15. Drakula

    Drakula Elite Member

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    That M is nice Dim.Original.
     
  16. boobies!

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    new name crits needed

    D5 - restart, do simple letters
    dim - flows pretty good, keep it up
    smik - i like it, good and readable. dont like the e tho
     
  17. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    i cant read what it says.
    simpler would be nice
     
  18. SAID

    SAID Moderator

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    try and make your r capital.
    and when your p and e join em, it makes it look like an s.
    try and fix that up abit.
     
  19. sallybsk

    sallybsk Senior Member

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    ah boobs, i can make out a P E and an S but thats it, simpler like said said :p

    after that, just work on flow because thats what i think makes a tag, then letters come naturally, when you get new ideas and so on.

    -.just kidding i dont see and S anymore. x]
     
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  20. fonone

    fonone Senior Member

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    i kind of do :S.. 2 even..