dryft-go back to simples a little more. that doesn't really have enough flow and going simple again you can rework your flow throughout the tag.
jihad- keep a consistent i and try to avoid the variations of letterspacing, connectors and overlaps. The I's throw off any possible flow because you can see how their stem are in diff spots in relevance of the letters next to them. Crit please
oops sorry lol Quote Thrice:"James wrong thread, post those in blackbook. Those aren't tags." How the hell u do quotes? lol
all you guys have to cut the boring out of you tag lol. make it interesting but not shitty, like clean and sharp? but just practise tons, and try new things try to get a handstyle down. and try to flow. heres some old pics. diso wares top right of pic-diso
^^not sure if its the tag or the focus, but I can't really read it. and about cutting the boring out, well we all gotta start simple and work up from there. you're just catching us in the growth phase.
sorry about the pictures, yea the focus is fucked, and, yes start with simples please, nothing looks worse then seeing arrows and stuff through your own tag lol ive seen it happen.
lols, i know i was using a fat marker, i hadnt used in a while so i wasnt used to it . i do some better ones with pencil but i just felt like vandalizing my desk some more. but thanks for the advice.
mmm dryft its coming along better, you can first try it slow, to have it not spaced as much, it always flows better like that. ( not super fucking slow, just not rushed, then practice each letter by itself) Then it will come along like that, then you can see its improvement, and you'll get new ideas for letters all the time.