yo man i liked it before, try to develop the older one, this one isn't as nice. the s doesn't flow with the rest.
My first attempts at a one liner any crits? Abide- those are pretty sick the onlything I can see is that the dot on the i is a little big and I don't like the a for the underline cest- make the letters a little bigger and spread out from each other
yarbles-simpler possibly? ahem-it's ok, just get a little flow going maybe abide-other than the thing off the A, it's looking hella dope some shitty stuff from spring break, mostly boston View attachment 358084 (the bottom one) View attachment 358085 View attachment 358086 View attachment 358087 View attachment 358088 View attachment 358089
JERS: think I've said it before, but always love your stuff. Only crit is the bottom half of the E sitting a little too close to the J. ABIDE: for the A, keep it whipped out like that, but, as a few other have said, not all the way into an underline.. still nice though! CEST2; I don't like the C to the E connection.. and let the T be the same size as the other letters. AHEM: Change the H, it goes against the flow. Maybe use a lowercase E? Whatever works for you.. Also have a flick for you below. MOES; no crits from me, i like it My first drips; [Broken External Image]:http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/1653/dsc02985ly0.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/849/50055778ne9.jpg One I don't like; [Broken External Image]:http://img377.imageshack.us/img377/3523/77237093ju2.jpg Random words: [Broken External Image]:http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/6192/aliceru2.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/2913/trickzep7.jpg One for Thrice // AHEM: [Broken External Image]:http://img132.imageshack.us/img132/9407/ahemit9.jpg
Shit flick, but I got bored so I hit up most of the people on this page.. The ones I could read.. Consider that statement and the photo crits, haha. In the ways of where to link letters and where not to. ie. Kemist, it's mad but don't link the e to m. Makes it look like a u. [Broken External Image]:http://img440.imageshack.us/img440/3791/image0273ht6.jpg