abide, those are nice and clean. im diggin the flow of em.
mose i like the shape an how the letters get bigger as they progress
emokid, there good for your first time. but im not really feelin the arrow on your S

i really dont like it, im working on a better one now. it started out nice, then i worked with it and it just got worse.
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these are real sloppy i practice doing them quick

purple or blue? crits are greatly appreciated too

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fuck the bottom.

klasic, gives crits if you want em

 

dont under line ur tag with ur k..

and purple

 

Klasic- do away with the K underline thing, move your letters closer together a bit
JetPack- Good simple. Get rid of the T overline....and start putting a little style in your letters.


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crits on this?

 

ive played with so many different k's and i cant seem to find one that looks right =/, if anyone has any ideas for it lmk

-Ark- i like it other than the star in the A
emokid it's tough to read, i see aieso

 

loks liek it was done with like a crayon type marker..nice

 

Black Prismacolor Premere Marker

 

dude, its like, the most legible hand on the page. o u e s o.
props to anyone on a wall :|

 

yo i'm diggin most of the stuff on this page, wallace lose the underline otherwise keep it up. jetpack keep working on it, maybe start over and try again.
I've been looking/working on these and i decided that i'm gonna keep one to work on, please give crits/ lemme know which is best.

 

is that you sister? She's hot.

 

nah dude, random girl in the dorms. i can give her number for some positive crits hahaha

 

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forgot this one. mine's the red, obviously.

klasic-make all your letters the same for now, and lose the underline K thing
jet-maybe try making them straight and add a little steeze possibly
jbigz-lose the underline. otherwise, not looking too bad
wise-i'd say the 4th is the best. try making the letters fairly simple and make sure not to take a long time on each letter because it'll end up looking really forced and unnatural.

 

mose thats such an ill picture. were do you reside if you dont mind me asking
i love your M, its freshhh

 

springfield, il. probably one of the worst scenes ever here, if you want to call it a scene, haha.

EDIT: and vois, get all the letters the same size. but it's not looking too bad. 3rd down on the 2nd pic is probably the best.

 

wise keep workin on it.. i like the 4th one the best that E is nice, maybe try messin around using a lower case I?


ight heres my first time using an NY fat, any comments??

says = Tano SOD
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haja that sucks a fat wang

 

like your mom..