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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by Denz_one, Jul 11, 2005.

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  1. Karlaps

    Karlaps Member

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    its like random scribbles i cant even read it try make it more simpler like take away the big bit that comes off the bottom of the k and the bottom of the b.
    and what does it say?
     
  2. HAJA

    HAJA Senior Member

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  3. Karlaps

    Karlaps Member

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    thats fresh haja i really like it
     
  4. Wallace

    Wallace Elite Member

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    i like it a lot too, nice flow
     
  5. JSBiggz

    JSBiggz Senior Member

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    crits?
     
  6. HAJA

    HAJA Senior Member

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    biggz.. that K is sick, whole thing is pretty good..i would add some quotes at the front to even out the flair off from the K, but thats just me. Its pretty long, but stick to it.

    woozie.. i think you got a good start.. i would get rid of how the lower limb from the K goes all through the A...you may need to add a fourth letter.. 3 letters are hard to get a good flow goin'

    ight here ill bump this for the new page..
    heres my tag in marker...(how i ussually do it) says "TANO" btw
    [Broken External Image]:http://img138.imageshack.us/img138/3518/jj004et8.jpg
    [Broken External Image]:http://img353.imageshack.us/img353/8162/jj003dd2.jpg
     
  7. JSBiggz

    JSBiggz Senior Member

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    [/quote]

    Uhh....there isnt a K in it


    Its

    M A S R O N E

    lol
     
  8. The_NaMEz_BaNKz

    The_NaMEz_BaNKz Elite Member

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    HAJA that shit is preety sick
     
  9. HAJA

    HAJA Senior Member

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    myyy bad.. well wtf is the last letter.. it would make a tight k lmao..all right i got the e now...i was just lookin at the n and e together..still fresh
     
  10. JSBiggz

    JSBiggz Senior Member

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    Uhh... yours are nice to...looks like you forgot to do a quotation in the first one....but in the second i would do away with the little horizontil lines on the line from the O
     
  11. HAJA

    HAJA Senior Member

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    ye thats mostly the one i do with paint to get a nice flair
     
  12. Cozmo

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  13. Techkanuck

    Techkanuck Senior Member

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    ai19.photobucket.com_albums_b159_civichatch2005_blackbook010.jpg

    BUMPAGE

    Tano- I like the flow but i still think the T-A is off a bit

    Cozmo- Not too bad i don't like the line through the center

    MASRONE- definitely like the stlye and feel but the A seems plain or something, MAYBE JUST ME
     
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  14. smikoer

    smikoer Senior Member

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    Bump.*

    MASRONE: I'm liking it, the E could do with a little bit more structure. Also, space them out a little bit more and try doing a larrger size.
    HAJA: I'm not feeling how the N connects with the O. Looks more like the O is an extension off the N.
    COZMO: Good start. Don't cross yourself out though.. lose that line through the word from the N and keep practicing.
    VOIS: Going well. Advance your flow and make the letters better looking, don't be too concerned about quotes and lines in the middle of the O just yet.
     
  15. WiseCracker

    WiseCracker Senior Member

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    yo HAJA - i'm really diggin your shit, nice work. i'd say when you go to spray try to go a bit slower. it looks really messy.
    Cozmo - simple simple simple then come back
    smikoer - the random words and the ones that you did for other people look better then your own. what's up with that? go back get rid of the drips, work on paper!

    Here's some stuff that i've been workin on withthe past crits lemme know what's good:

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  16. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

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    i think the curlys off everthing dont look so hot.
     
  17. Wallace

    Wallace Elite Member

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    i like the bottom right one the most
     
  18. WiseCracker

    WiseCracker Senior Member

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  19. oakstr1

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  20. Thrice

    Thrice Elite Member

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    Looking nice oak, try to get rid of some of that negative space there.
    Crit
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