Waaay better. I see how you went straight from your tag. The angle uniformity is 100% there. Structure is sound. Well balanced. Good job making the L taller to make up for the E. All I have to say is keep the top right of the H flat wich I think you already are. And try using a ruler or a straight edge to outline. Great Work
I don’t think it’s fully shit I kinda think it’s cool i don’t think iit’s s that bad I like how the first letter goes into all the letters and it doesn’t rlly off balance the tag it’s not neat and the arrow is shitty maybe try turning it into a heart or full circle around the tag