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id lose those drips, and mess around with the h i dunno its wierd to me but maybe its just me its deff got potential.

 

switch the s and the E up, take drips out.

 

fucking sick. I'd like to see the full throw if you've got a pic already on your computer. I dont even know what could be wrong with that.

bsc- work on that S and C. The b will be ok for now.

anything on mine? I know that thing is fucking toy, someones gotta have an opinion right?

 

gyse- make all your bars the same width like ur e but keep it up p.s mines not much better but ya lol

heres my most recent one critz ?





nice double post loze.. but just work on your can control

 

Alright, thanks. and before I forget, Loze- you can click edit and delete your second post so you dont get any shit for a double post. and dark, you dont actually have to give a reason for deleting or editing posts.

about your throw loze- its not so bad, but I think, aside from the can control issue, you should make those bars on the middle of the Z the same width. and dont make the E a bubble letter if the others are more blockish. A lower case E might look good with that.

dark- lose the thing on the bottom right of the R first. and on the A, do something with the top part that curves down, it just doesn't look right.the K and D look pretty good.

 

ok good to know and thanx ill try that

 

A few opinions


GYSE - I like it, id play around with the middle part
of your E a bit and maybe make the top right of your G wider.

LOZE - pretty much what GYSE said, play with that Z and try
keep your letters consistant.

VERB ONE - all good.

Worked in one a bit today I reckon its a bit better, still dunno about the M tho, let me know

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the m looks like two seperate letters to me.

 

Thats fuckin DOPEEE guy, keep bombin bro

 

thanks. the first one looked best but I think you might want to open up the top right section of the S. and the M might look better without that extension. the bottom of the B could be more circular.

here's that red and black I did and a new one I made today. which looks better?( and if the old one is better, then I'll make those changes you said smob.)
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thats a tight throw man i dont even know if there is anything to crit about

 

my throwie???

 

crits?

 

work on your f and l
they look like an e and c
but other than that pretty good

 

dark-try and keep letters the same size
thatsme- i like it alot
i hate my "u" crits please?