no offence, but has everyone gone crazy, joga you have the right idea in trying different styles but keep trying to find something because i'd rather see simple bubble letters than that but thats what you get when you experiment. i've nothing against anyone's opinion but that throwie is quite bad and everyone is saying that its good, joga, always compare your throwie to a good one just to see the huge difference and then you will realise that people who are more toy will say it is good because they use their self as a standard
Keep them both The bottom one needs a bit of work But it's always good to have a couple different styles to go with
these are ppl i know that wanted advice but dont have a computer to get on the forumz... my girl ms.sasy View attachment 386090 my boy zeus View attachment 386090
dont look like a hot spot, take your time, make it clean, need some can control brotha. View attachment 386184 View attachment 386185
Fubeilte first r a little so people can tell it's an r and not a wierd n or smething other than that they're nice though meko that green one needs a whole lot of work Lose the drips or watever on th bottom lose the accent lines on the inside you don't need those for a throw The y is alright and the second s is alright but the first two letters eed som work
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Not feeling the little O & I like that, small in front of the other letters. Should make each letter equal in size man. If the word is a bit long maybe shorten it to COS, COSM, or whatever.
cosmic- the letters are ok but make sure all the letters are the same size and then re-post it. sorry to keep plugging this but i don't know if my.favourite.addiction will come through so their is still spaces for the throwie battle. word is sipping, deadline is thursday. if i've got at least 4 entries by thursday i'll just post then so be quick
Hey guys thanks a lot for your tips. I rewrote it but i fucked up on the m. [Broken External Image]:http://img297.imageshack.us/img297/6554/scan0004sm6.jpg