lol was the flare on the k and accident

 

terkoe - stay off the lines for now.. back to the blackbook.
rsakens - looks good but the forcefield got sloppy on the bottom

 

Nw throw I'm working on

Keane I don't like how it starts straight and then starts curving near the end
Other than that it's nice

terkoe
New to graffiti stay off the lines.

 

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new name and throw crits?

Keane - it seems to lose flow as it goes. the letters get bigger and the curve keeps getting sharper. the style is nice though, i'd just lose some of the curve.

Yarbles - all i can say is maybe bring the second letter to the same size as the first, it kinda dominates the throw

 

Ae


Full throw


Arok make all the letters same size and lose the wierd end legs on the r and k

 

yarbles loose the thing on the right side of the a and make it a continuous curve all the way through, and make the top right a little more square to match the e. also keep it at ae cause its the best looking one

 

no, just no

 

somethin i was sposed to do last night but i fell asleep..it sais bam!

 

looks like pam

 

critz?

 

lay off the paint and hit the blackbook till further notice


stolen also[Broken External Image]:http://img393.imageshack.us/img393/88/picture304dm0.jpg

 

this doesnt help...


^btw the shading really sucks

so does the handstyle

 

yes yes it does help, and thanks for the critts cant wait to see something from you

oh wait...that was something from you!! HAHAHAHAHA i wasnt even paying attention

 

Shut up, he's helping you, if you can't take crits then stop trying to get them.

 

Uh yeah it should help.
Stay off the walls until you get better.


snap the shading is kinda wierd but the letters and fill are solid
and that hand is fine.
also don't make the shading bubbles and small it down a little bit, make it connect to the letter more

 

yeah
certain types of cement suck up paint like a sponge, it happens to everyone

 

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is this thread for painted throws only or for throws on paper too

 

Sized the e I tried changing the a up a little but it made it look wierd.

lucifer I can't read it.
Looks nice though, what's it say?

 

well snap i apologize.

thanks for the critz

no beef intended