Forgiven - I dont know if u give a shit, but theres a pretty big writer that goes by "Forgive" in Minneapolis. He's not that great, but he's pretty up.

 

bump

 

Bumpage, need some crits..

 

Oak, im not feeling that K at all,
straighten it up a bit more.

Rowdy, dope throws higher up the page,
but these ones seem a little rushed.

 

bleh

seek. first one is fresh

 

i sorta care but i didnt know, i live nowhere near minneapolis. i dont really know wut else to say. but i havent even started bombin yet ive jus been sketchin......you know, bbook shit.

 

haha word.

rowdysk4nker - i like it, just not the k.

 

MIST: I'm feelin that.

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Quick lil throw I did. Lemme get some crits.

 

Well heres my toy tags. im a toy but not that of a toy

what you think?

 

those dont look like throwies..

 

my ugly stuff from today-but i had to use export brand black remember that
dek- those are not throwups and you are more toy than most toys.
rowdy-nice
oak-the second is ok.
all imo

 

Bumpage for the critage...

 

atomic your shit is looking clean letters arent bad either but your sig always distracts me its so fresh .

 

oak- your O looks a lot like a D , you should round it off a little more

 

yeah..i havent been out in a LONG time. n i wasnt drunk so my shit was pretty fucked up.

 

wow whats with the violence?

i wouldnt be talking buddy cause i done better throw ups and pieces than you

 

how can you say that 'buddy'?
we havent compared our best stuff.
my throwups are terribly ugly but these spots wernt easy.
when i looked at your 'peices' (not throwups) done on paper, i could see slight potential but overall they were ugly and had no style. Your stuff would be better if you started off simple.
but anyway thats my opinion.
you asked for crits i gave them to you now your firing back.