hey sore the first one was the best. y did y make your dripping thing in cursuve? i like drippers i made one and its the shit. :lol:
Def. not feeling the top point of that S, where it curves, looks weird to me, to me anyways it does. The 3rd letter looks a bit tweaky too, and the glare makes it too hard to really see the entire thing good in that region so I cant really crit it much besides clean it up a bit, even the letters out.. Doesnt seem to flow quite right to me, but I like shit thats clean and flows.. Was a hard flick to crit with the glare and fuzz. [/b][/quote] this seems like something i would do. i like it but the N seems a little to high
yea, like everyone else is saying, get rid of the arrow. Work on dem fills, fat caps are your friend, not feelin the first bomb either, mostly the S, develop it more and it might be a bit better, ever think about addin a drop shadow? Like the S on the other flicks.. Drop the Arrow Work on dem fills Dont use that first S again less you redevelop it Add a drop shadow? Not bad tho, keep it up
i dont know if i posted these up. even though i dont write ion no more here you go this is right next to a police station. yes there is a police station in out park :angry:
euro, its a style thats thought of of being started and kept in europe mainly. i don't know it for the most part. but look at peyg's stuff and baper's old stuff, thats euro.
I realize this one has some lineup problems below the arrow... its one of my first pieces and it was painted under a bridge at night, so it was pitch black This one was probably the second piece I ever attempted...considering I'm still a beginner and know no locals that write I think I'm picking it up ok Looking for any criticizm or feedback to help me learn
first piece. outlines mad sloppy cus i was short on space and trying to use an XXXL for an outline (bad idea) Crits? Oh ya you know my bed and curtains turn you on oh ya just makin sure you all know it says RAGE not Zale
i think i sketch too much, thats the problem. my blackbook pieces are bomb but when i have a can im not as used to painting. plus i was usin spanish montana, not exactly the easyest thing to paint with.
paint pretty frequently. sketch alllll day long. your can control will suck for awile, but its gets better faster then your letters do. dont go bombing "everything" like ras said. just paint your room or tunels until your letters are good and people better then you think so to.
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i think i sketch too much, thats the problem. my blackbook pieces are bomb but when i have a can im not as used to painting. plus i was usin spanish montana, not exactly the easyest thing to paint with. [/b][/quote] lmao! what? you cant sketch too much bro....alot of my walls look better than my bbook sketches and mtn is a hell of alot better than genaric paint, and thats the shit i use the problem is, that you probobly need to sketchmore....if its the bomb then show us all a pic
^ exactly Zale...if your painting is that bad...then theres no way that your blackbook shit is the "bomb". Post it up in the blackbook thread and proove it