The sore is well nice.. tell your mate not to write dope unless his stuff really is dope!

 

Sore - i love your throwy its fucken good ay, dno bout the dope or the cror though, stay up bro.


the left bar on my N is just straight up fuct and the E, i dont even know whats goin on there but its fuct to, i like my S and K and the idea i had for the fill and shit but i think it could be a bit less sloppy. just pretty much critted myself but i wanna know what use think.

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lol Nesk, Seriously man. You dont need to post in the Toy Forums anymore... lol.

 

Cheat.. yes he does, skeam your can control is fantastic and so are your letters but there is still a lot of stuff you can improve on before you move up. but still nice stuff. i dont really like how the flaps at the end of the letters "overlap" or whatever there doing.

 

Nice nesk just not ur best.. dont like the N or E but its fresh



a we piece i popped out today....

 

get the fuck outta here go to the big boys

 

Oh i`m diggin that S for sure. the R is pretty nice to nice can control just not digging the other letters. something`s missing :huh:

 

the only thing i like in your work is your cleanness you never have a sloppy piece

 

These are my first 2 throwies ever! They are whack toy but all I can do is practice and that's what I'm doing. Constructive Criticism please.

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likin the trash

ya heres something i did the leg of the R is on an angled wall thats why it looks like that...i def cramped it but w/e

 

I'm feeling your flow there bruz. Good style design and flow. Fresh.

 

Trash, FUCKING awesome.
This is definitely your best piece

damn

 

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:blink: :lol: :lol: :lol:
stick
to
fucking
paper
pleeeeeeease

 

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shitty camara phone pic...

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crits?

 

word...bast is cute

 

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stick
to
fucking
paper
pleeeeeeease [/b][/quote]
Yes Sir.... <_< h34r: :unsure:

Lol, they were my first 2 ever! Well they looked good on paper....

 

i bet ya they didnt... if ya gunna do shit like that do it where people dont hav to look at it

 

Advice taken.

Any constructive critiscm apart from give up or stick to the paper? :lol: