fill sucked was in a hurry......thinkin bout changing my "A"s any crits will help.
[Broken External Image]:http://img480.imageshack.us/img480/7537/shittythro17bm1.jpg

 

i think you should change all your letters.....
not joking take it to the b-book thread before you paint anymore

 

always liked your stuff do you still get up alot like you used to?
you shoulda gone over the swatika to the right though

 

you really think its that bad? ....cus i know it definatley needs work but damn i didnt know it was that bad <_<

 

critics anyone please, i know its a really shitty picture, i will have another one up tomorrow

 

Dont do any painting yet. Just keep sketching for a while. Then u will get good at ur throws n shit.

 

Word, I've never really posted before. Any ways, I just recently changed my name to urah. I've done some straight letters, but I don't have any flicks. So here's some of the shit I've done in the past week. Blue one, proportions are a little off but I was in a bit of a rush. and the canvas..I was supposed to get the whole thing to myself but I had to split it with my boy cure so my letters are all over the place. Holler at me about this shit.

[Broken External Image]:http://i34.photobucket.com/albums/d101/zipweenis/mikmofool.jpg

 

This shit is hot! Im likin dat first one but thats jus me.

 

sry but that shit aint "hot". you need to hit the blackbook and work on your letter structure...

 

i can do an r fine on paper but cant do one for shit on a wall.....that goes for the rest of the peice too. bah
[Broken External Image]:http://img253.imageshack.us/img253/1144/ups015ez2.jpg

 

how do you guys have such clean lines? mine have like an overspray

 

10% caps
90% skill

 

Refuse, thats actually lookin pretty good.

On the R you can cut back with the brown to even each section out.. if that makes any sense.. and then adjust the white 3d afterwards if you need to.

 

drop the name sake, and learn clean straight letters like refuse first.

 

always liked your stuff do you still get up alot like you used to?
you shoulda gone over the swatika to the right though [/b][/quote]
The O and R are hot, S and E coule use a little work.. try losing the negative white space in the middle of the S and getting rid of that tiny extension on the lower part of your E.

 

I understand what you're saying, but I've been having a hard time improving it. I've done straight letters out the yin yang. any other ways you can think of?

 

Yo up for my first throwie after 3 weeks. No paint = no fill and DESPERATE.

[Broken External Image]:http://img382.imageshack.us/img382/8008/imgp00302sn1.jpg

Yeah I know it's toy. It looked better on blackbook... <_<

 

i like the first one but why are the first three letters small and the last 3 big.. it makes no sense

 

bombing for the girlfriend..decided to throw her up