Daws - love the peice, but i agree that it should have 3d instead Main- like the leters in the first 2, but theres to much going on Nes - nice throw, though i think the e could use a little work Tride - like the leters DIGel -- dope. just my 2 cents. any crits? [Broken External Image]:http://img248.imageshack.us/img248/7953/mrholllow3df6.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://img408.imageshack.us/img408/3999/mrthrowiejz3.jpg[Broken External Image]:http://img161.imageshack.us/img161/7075/mergahollow2hm7.jpg
try to make your letters in as few clean strokes as possible, it looks like its overlapping way too much
you never been to american flats then, there are dope writers from all over the west coast up there almost every day, its a famous spot.
both guys owned and mera or w/e could use a lil more time in the books or mabey a practice board and work on your lettering a bit befor u starting hitting panels that aker shit is flossed tho i'm feeling that chrome sum new shit out with muster again but yeah any 604 writers?
merga and hamwallet oh my lord. sorry bros, those are no good. go to new to graff thread. stay simple. use bars. don't hit the streets yet. 951 - the coloring seems a bit off
merga and hamwallet - stick to the notebooks man u guys are killing me with that o and pleaaase stay off the streets your guys's stuff aren't worth keeping up stick to books and practice boards till you get better 5yn- cool i guess but why so many pics of the same thing just different locations its like ur trying to show off no beef or nuthing but we can give u crits off just one 951- u got the 3d down as far as i can see could use a little work on it but u get the idea but lose the bubbles in the fill and personally im not diggin the bubbly letters but not bad
the bubbles were jsut wasting paint, ill try gettin a pic of it i took when they were there lol, and yeaa my can control aint that great yet, or at least for straight lines
umm iz ok peice try hit it wid sum more style man u can keep it readable if yu wnat but j hit it wid sum more style i like the colorz though
LOL holy damn that just made my day haha sorry man but you can't honestly think that's good. what you need to do is check out the "new 2 graff" thread in this toys forum, if it's still around, and see what it has to say. Start out simple with block letters and slowly progress to more technical stuff, but be warned this isn't something that just all of a sudden happens dude. letter development takes a lot of time, you're going to be at it for a while just like everybody else who starts. take you're time and practice a ton.
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