hookedonhiphop - now its too simple, make it simple but with some creative touch to it, bloock letters are kinna meh in my books. youve got nice straight lines though
constructive criticism: inconsistent bars inconsistent letter size (height and width) funky overlapping of letters whack extensions too many bling marks ...but you got me on racked paint. my main piece of advice is learn to write first before piecing, itll make everything come much easier. one way i find that helps for piecing is write out your letters really big and kinda spacious then go back beef em up with some bars and continue from there. that meethod is way better than free forming letters
Akel - the style is dope, L is to big for the rest of it and i don't like the hole in the A keep it up.
yo in contrast to what street smart said, i like the hole in the A, its fresh. work on your L and the leg of your K is a bit thin
Akel: real nice man. you've heard from everyone on the L and i think you could have cut the line right in the middle of the E back a little. its a little wavy. but thats lookin real good man
a lot of peoples throwies look like it to be honest, its an ill style. im gonna come up with something better, this is to just for now to get some movement in my outlines
oh rite, yea mines also different..worse even haha i almost never throw up when i bomb its with slaps usually
much better man not great but much better. still lacking style but that will come with practice honestly man if ur going to paint stick with doing those for i while. just some more tips donk under line ur letters with ur h cause in my opoinin it looks a little wak. ur d is also to wide and in the second one its cut off whats with that? some of ur lines are also kinda sketchy but that will come with painting more simps.