yea my C ussually doesnt come up that high but my S turned out weird for some reason oh well, thanks for the crits guys
cause::: lookin real fresh that throw is niceee Desire: you do that at night? lookin really good Sieze: lookin really good as usual. but what happened with the pink outline? PAINTING on a cloudy night with walmart gold sucks haha [Broken External Image]:http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/paint005.jpg shitty throw [Broken External Image]:http://i146.photobucket.com/albums/r258/rank1234/paint003.jpg
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thnx for the feedback everyone.. dim you`re right i was allready wondering why my 2nd e didn`t came out like the one on my sketch but now i see its because of the r.. thanx Rank.. i did this piece in the afternoon i hate working at night at spots like this because its just to dark and my fills will look half as good.. i like your piece aswell but i think your r covers the a to much and i wouldn`t put the tag in the R next time.. Geks: your green yellow throwup looks ok but i wouldnt add the highlights next time unless you make the throwie a lil bigger... the redwhite throwie looks allright to..not feeling the other 2.. seize:looks hot... mmmburgers:your stuff is lookin better every time.. get rid of the open space between your u and s, work on your e and you will have a decent throwup.. infoe:cancontroll looks good and i like the colours but needs work on the letterstructure.., keep sketching fwn:sorry im not feelin it..your cancontroll does`nt look bad but keep sketching, work on your letterstructure and get rid of the crosses...
no problem. and no, i'm still working on developing my style. i'm drawing out some really great ideas in my blackbook right now though. i'll post pics later.
seize: looks really clean as usual bosr: keep workin on your letter but i like that cracked fill\ fwn: dont like those, keep workin on your letters rank: i like the gold one, cant really see the throw though heres mine my first time painting alone
Enor: very nice. i love the colors. the only problem i see is that your forcefield is uneven. and the e's a little skimpy. and that pink tag is king.
Enor- Decent can control and a cool spot, letters need work though. Seize- Clean shit, just the S isn't consistent with the other letters width wise.
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sick- the first two 'mop' ones, in my opinion, are pretty cool. but what happened to the last tag? did the can cop out on you at the last minute?.. i'd also work on your handstyles.
Seize - fix the S a bit it looks great Enor - real dope nice spot Sick - there ok keep working on it.