lol, thanks Rave. I'm not sure what the characters are supposed to be either. I just really like the WTF factor when people see it.
akel,over,mcfinnigan,japer and trashtalk look dope.. rave: im not really feelin your`s its to blocky and looks very simple, your cancontrol looks allright tho.., i would stick to paper for a while.. noir: your throwup looks pretty good for a 1st one but i would change the hole inside your o and change the top of your i a bit so it flows better with the rest.. sorry but i dont really like the characters cause: work onn your letterstructure and try to make your letters the same size and hight, some shadow would look better to... new throwups ive been practicing: [Broken External Image]:http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0265.jpg [Broken External Image]:http://i23.photobucket.com/albums/b398/Scratchie-/RIMG0271.jpg crits..?
nice desire i cant really tell u nething lol the only thing i can think would b 2 work on sum nice shading View attachment 343252 what u guyz think of that n i already know the dots r gay n i forgot the shadow
wasted u got the can control down but do simpler shit cause dont write that some one does with mad respect john skeatch more that j looks wak rave when u do a force field keep the hand moving loose the dots and fill it in a bit more jesice looking ill man make a throw up mimicymcfinigan looking dopeeeeee the wall ate the paint like a box of chocolate..... CRITESS
-Desire your throw ups are lookin damn good. -Rave i'd say fill in your letters a bit more and widen the left side of your A so its a bit closer to the R. -TESM lighten up your hand a bit to stop drips and definitely work on the outline for the force field. -Cause i'd say try and work on your letters so they have a better flow. Also, once your caps come in work on some solid shadowing before working details.
k i had a kid claim that i bit that frum gettin up which i didnt but does ne1 else think it looks like those letters i think those letters r way 2 simple 2 b stolen frum newhere lol
The letters seem pretty simple. Honestly tell that kid to get off his high horse and quit eating shit.
already done lol its so funny heres the whole convo first he posted in the 905 thread that a hollow i did what that same style was biten from gettin up n then i pm'd him rave905-not even ur fuct n keep that kinda shit 2 pm's man nightwriter905-ur the one to talk u fuckin fruit wanna fight? rave905-yo im always down 4 a fight if its 1on1 y dont u tell me who u r nightwriter905-apparently ur 18 and madd small im younger then u... rave905-yo wtf is this who r u hearing this shit from n who r u nightwriter905-i aint saying shit all man all i was saying was that u got ur hallow letters from getting up bro rave905-wtf u mean ur not sayin shit all u fuckin called me a fruit n asked if i wanted 2 fight fuck u n thier not frum that game man lol show me the pic frum gettin up then u started beefin me bro so y dont u stop hiding behind a user name n tell who u fuckin r pussy nightwriter905-chill out man ill find u a flick of it and ill send it to u and i just said wanna fight to say i aint no pussy i was in the nav crew but that was like 2 yrs ago now thats all ima say bout myself and bro i aint beefin just tellin yuh that u gotta switch up ur style cuz ppl were tellin me that u got ur throwy from gettin up so i was the one to break it to yuh and hold up ima find a flick of that throwy rave905-lol y wont u tell me who u r scared or sumthin i dun hide behind a username nightwriter905-i aint scared im just sayin rave905-nah thats the point is ur not sayin n then he never pm'd me ak
haha i got another guy pm'in 2 being a pussy ass hater n he wont tell me what he writes either ppl in my town r so fuct up man hastres reno is his username
watch wat u say about certain ppl they can and will smash ur skelitor right outta urself son.. all i can say is he knows wats up n has all rights to say wats goin down... not hatin rave ur chill for the 30mins we bombed together but keep it in mind...
View attachment 343622 what u guyz think of that 1?? its my first attempt at a super simple straight letter sorta piece type thing cant c the a too well but its blue fill
rave dats aight the letters r maybe a lil 2 simple tho lol daws it looks like u used a skinny 4 the fill lol the last 1 is nice tho