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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. ENOC

    ENOC Senior Member

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    Yeah i know. i've been sketching quite a bit. come to think about it. thats all i do at school. lmao. and i have no clue how i got all my credits to graduate a year early. lol.
     
  2. oakstr1

    oakstr1 Senior Member

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    first time paintin a simple? what you mean?
    that color combo is dope, n i would move the K out a lil more. it looks nice
     
  3. Chump

    Chump Senior Member

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    i've never done a simple like that before... started out with throws
     
  4. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    sokeh, id sketch up a new KEH. the sharp edges on the KEH look kinna wierd since the first two letters are smooth around the edges. make the KEH the same size of the S and O as well. it kinna gets smaller as it progresses.

    its nice an clean though, good job. an it looks like you had to climb something to get up there. thats my fav part about the game.:D
     
  5. Chump

    Chump Senior Member

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    yea we had to climb up some sketchy stuff lol... yea man thanks for the crits... earlier that night was the first time sketching a simple so i went out and tried to paint it with a friend...but ill sketch it out more and go paint it and prolly post it...
     
  6. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    do it up son, shit aint gonna come over night. but your on the right track man. for a first simple. thats good
     
  7. maneframe

    maneframe Member

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    I Got Clout- love the Ease freight, them e's are niiice.
    Bombers Ambition-the colours on the first Sore piece are fresh to death!
    Bogus-im into them colours and simple letters, tight piece. needs a better pic though.
    C.N.K- good letters on that Neoro, i dont like the shadow though. the (orange) second outline brings it out nicely.
    Garbage Down Tha Way- I like the E and H in your throwie.
    Enoc- good for your 2nd piece, definitly needs letter structure though, use simple letters and bars.
    Chump- cool letters, very nice roofop!! and a good colour choice

    ai145.photobucket.com_albums_r240_bojangles999_DSC00522.jpg
    fairly quick one!
     
  8. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    i dont like the middle of the e
     
  9. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    drop shadow needs work
     
  10. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    not feelin those indents in the middle of the 'M". it would look better filled in. does that make sense?
     
  11. maneframe

    maneframe Member

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    ^^^yeah man, i understand you. cheers for crits i'll get workin on it :)
     
  12. -Panik-

    -Panik- Senior Member

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    Mane I like the colourscheme, but yea def lose the indents on the m, other than that keep'r up
     
  13. maneframe

    maneframe Member

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    ai145.photobucket.com_albums_r240_bojangles999_S7301302.jpg this one done in mid april, basically the same letters...
     
  14. Bah Humbug

    Bah Humbug Senior Member

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    looks better but i dont like the little bump in the middke of the e
     
  15. MarOne...

    MarOne... Elite Member

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    yeah, that e is weeeak.

    Everything else is dope though.
     
  16. RUDE_Bwoy

    RUDE_Bwoy Elite Member

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    thats a dope color scheme.just wok on the e
     
  17. EST2007

    EST2007 Elite Member

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    shoulda used a green outline. it woulda made it really pop. also, once again the drop shadow is off.
     
  18. Cin123

    Cin123 Senior Member

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    ^(tezm)personly i think the MD BLOCK at the bottom is realy dope
    but thats jsut me
    :p jks
     
  19. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    I don't know MANE. I don't mind the indents on the m.
    Im likin your simps...and everyone else allready mentioned the e. It could just flow with the piece a lil better in my opinion. Ya know?
    Good control though, fo reals.
     
  20. ShhImACop

    ShhImACop Member

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