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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. Cin123

    Cin123 Senior Member

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    i dont get no crits..all i got was one
  2. Teez-EmM!!!

    Teez-EmM!!! Elite Member

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    mane thats looking dope man but try and thickin up those lines man.

    cin feeling it alot def my fave by you try makeing the hole on the c a tad wider and if u go a bit slower with your can ur lines will be less misty and look cleaner

    faker i know that ur probly thinking that that piece is really dope cause trust iv pulled wacker shit than that outa my ass befor and thought i was some king but to keep it short just keep sketching in the book do simples (your can control isnt half bad tho)
    jers that shit is ill but im wondering do you ever sketch cause it seems like you rarly improve your shit. dont get me wrong tho im feeling it it just seems like you should be a whole lote better letter wize than u are.

    reign try useing a darker out line colour cause the colour skeem isnt that bad its just the green out line with the green force field that throughs it off.

    i thought this was the cleanest part to my piece
    any crits??
  3. seywhat

    seywhat Elite Member

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    tezm- i really dig that, maybe bake the middle bars of the m wider, im really feelin the letters though. fresh
    faker- sketch alot more before u paint
    jers- ill, what kind of paint u using?
    kasr- clean as fuck
    reign- fix the 3d a little, but dope overall
  4. atlok7

    atlok7 Elite Member

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    tezm- i like the idea. just try and fade the colors a little softer instead of such a rough hard fade. but nice work
  5. Identity Crisis

    Identity Crisis Senior Member

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    stock caps all day lol...last throwie is my old style but i think it has more flow (as far as bad toy flow goes)
    Last edited: May 5, 2008
  6. jersOneTIC

    jersOneTIC Senior Member

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    krylon and mtn for force field and 3d.
  7. Bombers Ambition

    Bombers Ambition Elite Member

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  8. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    the s and the o look good.
    the r and the e need a little work.
    also not feeling the random squiggly extensions much.
  9. oakstr1

    oakstr1 Senior Member

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    like it a shit load..the R just reminds me of a K with the line in the middle but its nice. how big is it?
  10. Alien invasion

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  11. Cin123

    Cin123 Senior Member

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    alien work on dem simps
  12. -Leski

    -Leski Senior Member

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    Alien- work on simples, learn how to work 3d/drop shadows, learn how to work a forcefield to make it pop off the wall rather then a background... type thing.

    Tell your boy not to toss up crowns.
  13. Teez-EmM!!!

    Teez-EmM!!! Elite Member

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    paint under bridges for now cause that really wak and im sure other writers in your area would be pissed to see that shit up on a spot like that
  14. Alien invasion

    Alien invasion Member

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    its not a crown its MBA.
    i have better things done (i think) i just dont have pics, i will soon.
    thanks for the advice though
  15. Gyse

    Gyse Senior Member

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    [Broken External Image]:

    here's a new one. I think/hope it's better.

    Alien- you may want to consider a new name:

    other than that, I think it's all been said- 3D and simples. and when you fill stuff in, go left to right(or the opposite w/e) or up and down. circles and "scribbling" to fill it if you know what I mean look shitty.

    actually, your N is good. perfectly simple with no extensions or bends. keep working.
  16. *cept*

    *cept* Senior Member

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    that shit can be fixed. just throw a little more paint under the hole in the R. like a couple inches. it'll even it out.
  17. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    gyse, 3 things.

    thats wack and ugly.
    you should post it in the blackbook thread.
    dont bother tellin him to change his name, cuz i doubt he will.
  18. AOTPs

    AOTPs Senior Member

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    ^^^ hahahaha agreed alien i think u should just stick to paper till u get you get the hang of it
  19. Solar²

    Solar² Member

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  20. Fluffy Bunnies

    Fluffy Bunnies Elite Member

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