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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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  2. cans905

    cans905 Senior Member

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    ark- looks like decent can control, but work on ur letter structure, keep it simple
    egozen- wrong thread lol btw, how old is that sketch?

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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  4. emel

    emel Senior Member

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    Your can control is pretty decent clout, just keep on them simple joints you goin in the right direction1!

    handys need a lot of work though.
  5. freshair

    freshair Senior Member

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    its me the muffin man...the muffin man. the muffin man.
  6. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    true that with the hands ease.
    just rock capital letters or something till you can funk em well.
    that shit looks pretty ballin though.
    maybe fix up the R a little.
    how long did that take you?
    the fill looks nice.
  7. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    yes easer! big is better, good job. i hate your R though, you should make the kick connect to the loop rather than the spine.

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    La coka - Those are capital letters? But I have no excuses. Ill work on em. And im not too sure how long it took me, maybe 45 to an hour? Its a pretty chill spot. Wasnt too worried about it.

    I fucking hate that R too. Havent come up with a solid one yet, so that one was freestyled...horribly. But 'preciate the crits fellas. The next one'll be on point.
  9. RFI. SPit

    RFI. SPit Moderator

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    That isn't a sketch dude haha
  10. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    gotta start painting quicker b, im sure thats a lot longer than the average police response time

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    I know homie, I know. :( But like I said, it was a chill spot, so I was chillin on it. And I always find myself nitpickin over the smallest shit no one else is even gonna notice. Gotta get over that shit, and I think Ill be alot faster.
  12. JETPACK!!

    JETPACK!! Banned

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    word, whenever i don't need to rush, i jam out hard. i'll spend an hour on something i can usually do in half an hour. but good shit man, its looking good

    P.S. to worms, i freestyle my fills. i dont have markers. (just say your comment a page back)
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  13. Worms

    Worms Guest

    easer not bad looks like u can pull some decent shit off afterall
  14. Solar²

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  15. DEAR

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  16. numberonestunna

    numberonestunna Senior Member

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    keane - looks good. you have a unique style i like a lot.
    easer - lovin the simp. i like your older tag though.
    solar2- rework your letters. the W is pretty wack. youve got the rite idea tho; solid fill, clean lines, 3d is right for the most part. keep practicing before you paint.
    dear - nice clean piece but the letters dont really work for me. the 3d is also funked up a lil. not bad, just keep reworking your letters. also watch your colors, know what colors work well together.
  17. ColdBlooded

    ColdBlooded Senior Member

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    The bottom left part of the "X" is ug... Crits?
  18. MrDobalina

    MrDobalina Senior Member

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    first off that shit looks about 1 foot tall.. go bigger. and go to the bottom. dont be afraid of the lip.

    edit: and do a one shot
  19. Sarto

    Sarto Senior Member

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    exam- , looking good but make the a and m the same height as the e x , less u did that on purpose , its all good ,

    Im doing a piece sometime this week so ill have that shit up hopfully ,
  20. timeless progress

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    keane- I like your style, seems to all fit. the letters and fill fit togather, its clean, but im guessing it was a legal, why didnt you find a freight yard, or a chill spot to put it up.
    exam- I cant say I like it but you shouldnt care what I think anyway, my crits for you is work on getting the letters to flow better, they seem to clash in my eyes.
    here is a 2 letter bomb with no 3d I did last night, a character, and a handie on a marquee
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    ^^really dark pic since I took it at 2am but I think you can still make out what it is
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    the character is simple and easy to put up, thats all I care about with it, its used for bombing purposes, I have much more complex characters I can use but untill Im happy with my can control Im not even gonna attempt them
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    2 letter no 3d hotspot. funny thing is I havent even used this simple bubble style throw in close to a month except for last night

    crits please

    BTW all these were the same flat black crylon360, I like the line k360s make