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Discussion in 'Toys forum' started by KAMO, Jun 21, 2005.

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  1. Snew

    Snew Senior Member

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    Ark- really clean nice work..
    Rasek- Fresh as always
    Easer- sick spot.. just smooth out the fill.. but still good ups..
    Vagrant- Work on your fills and can control before ya hit the freights.. i know im not good enuf yet eithor dude..

    anyways.. this is from tonights session.. it was way tooo dark i was cutting back and adding like a mother fucker.. and i noticed i forgot the 3-d on the W.. ill go back during daylight and touch it up..

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    any crits?
     
  2. ColdBlooded

    ColdBlooded Senior Member

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    Keane-I would have left the first one with all the scribbles, that was my favorite of yours, its even better now but could have been 2 pieces in 2 places instead of one over another, also I personally think the brown around the new one was a big waste...It's nice though!!.
    Easer-Nice job, good can control letters and 3D exspecially, did a good job with the big bump on where the second E is to, good stuff.
    Vow- decent can control, letters are lame though..And 3d makes no sence, Keep working on it, try to make the "w" less of a 2 bars and triangle in the middle kind of thing and more of a \/\/... (Bars)
    Dear-The black lines in the 3D need to be better, in the "A" that one line should be going straight down, nice stuff though, don't try to make it look to good, I can see you did the black outline, then pink forcefeild and then black outline again to touch up, don't stress to much over a basement piece.
    Vagrant-I'm not a big fan of the shape deal, plus it's sloppy, but I do understand trains at night (pain in the ass without light) stay off the frieghts for a bit till your ready.
    Geya?- That "a" looks like that little one eyed green monster in monsters or what ever..Fr3sZh Yo0O0oO0oO0
    Snew- color scheme is amazing, really looks nice, the piece it's self needs a bit of work, I would like to see the rest from "tonights session"
     
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  3. timeless progress

    timeless progress Senior Member

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    bottem page bump for crits
     
  4. Worms

    Worms Guest

    hit the books ur character sucks no offense but if u hadnt a told me that was supposed to be a charac i would thought it was some random lines to be honest but ye stick to the books for now save ur money cus im assuming u buy ur paint
     
  5. timeless progress

    timeless progress Senior Member

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    well you assumed wrong, I have better things to waste my money on

    edit: after reviewing pieces you posted Imma go ahead and put you on my block list since Id rather only read crits from people that can grasp the concept of structure and style, seriously dude for being so errogant you have the same generic style every toy in my city uses. And the fact that you assume things dosnt make you any better
     
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  6. rsakens

    rsakens Elite Member

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    brown wastn a waste cheep paint and a fat cap on top the rest is done with Montana hardcore get your point but dint wanted to let my piece as it was crossed

    it was a chill spot man but i am no legal sucker :)
    and i life in a saml town .. no lets call it big village
    so there is no freight yard damm there are not even walls beside the tracks =/ so i am happy enogh if
    can find a new wall that i can hit up what i can find dupe
    thanks for the comments ...
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  7. South-Pole

    South-Pole Elite Member

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    no,just no,even though i don't paint so often,im with worms,its just a waste of money and seriously i prefer seing those spots blank go hit the books,your characters are bad,your throwie(bubble letters)are bad
    wait even your handie is bad,read the new 2 graff thread go back to keyboard letters and simples,make your handies simpler, don't try bubble letters yet,and don't paint till you get better.
    and yes i do grasp the concept of structure and style if that suits you,try reading other peoples crits if you wanna get better,and don't call worms toy,since you're one yourself.

    edit:Keane-man,those are mad clean,very nice can control,i wish i had the same :(
     
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  8. I GOT CLOUT

    I GOT CLOUT Elite Member

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    Exam - Your E's always on point. And I know X is probably the hardest letter to pull off, but...you need to fix em up. Keep gettin up though.
    Snew - Piece looks decent, just not my choice letters.

    On another Note, I think its funny everyones sayin my control was good n shit, cause that was all dollar paint+stock caps. But preciate all the crits people. Stay up.
     
  9. Snew

    Snew Senior Member

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    Bump from last page
     
  10. -sense-

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  11. ColdBlooded

    ColdBlooded Senior Member

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    Yea, it is pretty hard...But that's no excuse I guess, i'm just going to do straight key board letters, no add ons bend curves at all until i can get something worth looking at.
     
  12. freshair

    freshair Senior Member

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    hm.......im sure every real writer or bomber would agree when i say NO ONE LIKE THE 360 CAN...

    geya..dont like ur shit..hit the books.

    exam...that E is ugly the X i agree with you THE A is straight AND i like the M...
     
  13. ColdBlooded

    ColdBlooded Senior Member

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    Not a very good day of painting, my mind wasn't on the wall today, rushed it way to much...Oh well, first attempt at a very simple bomb, took about 10-15 minutes or so. Crits?
     
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  14. Worms

    Worms Guest

    aww man not another person startin shit jus cus i spoke the truth im like a hater magnet or somtn
     
  15. La Coka Nostra

    La Coka Nostra Elite Member

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    EXAM, A and M look fine.
    X looks too skinny, and too far to the left.
    Bring the top and bottom bars of the E out more and make them even lengths.
     
  16. Worms

    Worms Guest

    tru well wen i used to be on this site i would post shit that sucked and i got flamed but i took it n i got better i didnt think ppl were so soft now a days but w.e ill be kind
    and yo pm me about the battle
     
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    osnapizzel Banned

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  18. ColdBlooded

    ColdBlooded Senior Member

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    Trust me, this whole thing would look so much better if I didn't do the "M" backwards by accident, FUCK..:mad:
     
  19. NEZ89

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